Regret

Heavily tread, are those small fractious steps
On the stairs to my own peace of mind
The sound of transgressions that I'd rather forget
is the pounding of a most clamorous kind

The dialogue I hold deep within myself
drums on the door of the closed minded truth
I try to rewrite scripts,  shove them back on the shelf
But the turbulence shakes them loose

No matter, how buried, how deep I will hide them
My conscience can shovel them out
That child that is me denies what was done then
But can't deafen the voices that shout

I profess to regret many sins I've committed
The most difficult task is the one of admitting



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For the Contest: "Regret" sponsored by Black Eyed Susan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 8:13 PM
you did well in Susan's Regret contest... luv ~ SKAT ~
Arowolo Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 11:58 AM
Wonderful piece,Carrie...Congrats on your win....It is well deserved....
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 12:24 AM
Congrats Carrie ....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 10:32 PM
very DEEP, Carrie!!! I don't regret too many things so this was a hard contest for me and I took it in a different direction from what Susan must have wanted. BIG congrats. you really captured the essence.
Andresen Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 4:06 AM
- Your thoughts ... I can recognize them. - Well done Carrie!- Luck in contest, hope this win! - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Tacito Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 8:33 AM
Admission, the 1st step. The most difficult one. Strong emotional power to this!
Bauer Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 3:54 PM
i think everyone can relate to this poem. well done!
A   Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 3:33 PM
wishing you luck in the contest... have a good day Carrie... LINDA
Mckenzie Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 3:31 PM
um I feel your powerful regret so well done as you always do wonderful Carrie! Laura :)
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