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Regret

Salty tear drops fell as her heart broke. Hopes and dreams evaporated like smoke. She wanted forevermore! Not another closed door? Drowned by memories, that threatened to choke. Trapped into the detritus of her own mind. Another love contract left unsigned. Frozen into inaction! An incomplete fraction. Accept destiny that has been assigned? A shattered heart maybe beyond repair. Unlucky in love, a fate most unfair! Does she dare keep trying? Her crushed heart is dying. Reluctant to love, her final declare.

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/22/2015 3:39:00 PM

Hi Cecilia! Love affairs can bring both joy and pain. Some people are born unlucky in love, and in the end they give up and shy away in fear of getting hurt repeatedly. Your poem makes this amply clear. Hope true love will come your way again:) // paul

Tim Ryerson

Date: 9/14/2013 3:52:00 PM

I see you took the serious route in this contest my friend and it is VERY effective! A shattered heart can be repaired but then there are those nasty scars, but the scars give us insight and wisdom which you have displayed here...You are growing by leaps and bounds as a poet, Cecilia and I am SO happy to see you entering and winning contests! - Tim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2013 4:10:00 PM

Good lines on regret!! Congrats for your win, Cecilia.

Joseph May

Date: 9/9/2013 10:29:00 PM

congrats on a fine win Cecillia

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2013 8:39:00 PM

Cecilai,, congratulations on your win ~SKAT~ :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/9/2013 6:36:00 PM

Hi Lovely Cecilia, love all 3 limericks.. I love the first one, mostly... congrats...Linda

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/9/2013 4:32:00 PM

Cecilia, Congrats on your win with this trio of limericks! Love, Kim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2013 3:30:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your great winner...Congrats on placement in the winners' list..Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/9/2013 3:21:00 PM

It appears I am right, you made the winners list. Congratulations!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2013 8:05:00 AM

Good morning Cecelia, I feel some of the questions relate to my daughter, who's in a state of declaring all sorts of emotions to love. wishing you luck in the contest. I enjoyed all 3 limericks. Hope you enjoy my newest poem called "Of Ink." a dedication to all poetry soup poets... xox~ Linda

Donna Jones

Date: 8/13/2013 4:14:00 PM

Love the line frozen into inaction...nice poem..good luck in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2013 3:35:00 PM

YOu chose a good topic, regret about love always enters people's minds!! Good luck in the contest.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/12/2013 1:16:00 PM

Reluctant to love.....oh Cecelia....maybe for now....but always leave the door of your heart slight ajar.....Love will come in unawares.....

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/12/2013 11:35:00 AM

Well done, should do well in the contest Cecilia.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/12/2013 11:01:00 AM

- It is said that we should kiss a lot of frogs before we find "prince" - Patience .... luck will come! - A very good poem Cecilia! - Luck in love and Luck in contest ! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/12/2013 8:57:00 AM

Been there. I understand how these feelings go. This was very hard hitting for me. Wonderful job!