Regret

I knelt down at a little creek
To cure my aching thirst.
But before the water touched my cheek
It asked me something first:

“Whose reflection is this here?
Does it have a name?
It has your eyes and look of fear
Yet I know it’s not the same.”

The silent voice then went away
To leave me all alone.
And in my thoughts the question stayed,
With the answer still unknown.

I gazed into the rippled face
And, though I thought it strange,
Those eyes, that hair, the look of grace
Were once mine before I changed.

Now my eyes are dark and weary,
Worn out from hiding pain.
My tears are dry, my mind is dreary
And my life is down the drain.

So I dove into the crystal stream
To save that fragile child,
But as I leapt into the dream
The waves just glared and smiled.

The creek was winding and much too wide
The current took me fast.
I tried to swim against the tide
But I could not change the past.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/24/2012 6:20:00 AM
Very deep and meaningful :)
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Date: 6/18/2012 8:00:00 AM
Oh I like this,,,, keep writing,,,, have a blessed day Samantha ;}
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Samantha Senft-Greenberg
Date: 6/18/2012 9:40:00 AM
Why thank you
Date: 6/17/2012 3:41:00 PM
We can't change the past..but we can choose to learn from it..excellent flow here Samantha!! Enjoyed your poem!!
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Samantha Senft-Greenberg
Date: 6/17/2012 4:22:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 6/17/2012 2:42:00 PM
Sometimes we really do put ourselves in situations that we CAN NOT get ourselves out of but frantically wish we could. Regret is THE most perfect name for this poem, dear Samantha <3
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Samantha Senft-Greenberg
Date: 6/17/2012 2:44:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 6/17/2012 2:32:00 PM
A river runs through it...to me we all already new it...peace and blessings
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