Regret



rose bloom set afire flame offense chars love most dire fray'd woe fuels grief pyre
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Chircop Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 6:07 AM
Sad...burning...and beautiful at the same time..I love it
Parker Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 2:32 AM
Thank you, CC. A worthy relationship expounded. :o))
Baker Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 3:28 PM
Well written with great imagery, Arlo. Write On! Bill
Parker Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 6:27 PM
Thx 4 stopping by, T.B. :o)
Sands Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 2:17 PM
Very well written Arlo! I love it :)
Parker Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 8:18 PM
Many thx , Heidi. Be well. :o)
Ashley Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Dear Arlo, within your vivid verse I find such sad beauty.. and I adore the use of the word "char". Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 5:42 PM
Indeed, my friend.. unfortunately
Parker Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 3:47 PM
Always great when you stop by, Susan. Heartbreak kinda like burning a great ribeye to "charcoal"! Take good care. :o)
One Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 3:06 AM
An excellent arrangement of words Arlo...
Parker Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 8:24 AM
Struggled. Arrangement is a sage depiction. Thx 4 visit, S1. ;o/
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