Regret - Feat Michael J Falotico

A bullet meant for one has somehow hit us both...
We tried to share more then we could but with little hope.. 
Now two hearts lay on the floor as pieces flow away..
I wanted you and her but my mind just couldn't stay..
To break one without the other is magic trick not found..
So now I lay here with my heart that barely makes a sound...
The hands of time I can not move or somehow change this mess..
I tried to have it all but I just ended up with less...
I damaged my own feelings by lying to her
Now I can’t live my days without my pearl
I never did realize, she makes my heart stirred
I’m on my insanity, my chance has been hurled
Her face now is my nightmare I can’t leave off
Lurking my thoughts of her wise and magic touch
What was inside me, I’d bled her heart and love
These make me drown my heart where evils crouch
Regret makes me awake yet in time kills me more 
Death would only make me suffer inside the earth’s core
To live this curse is my only option
Until her forgiveness drunk by me as the curing potion

First 8 stanza: By Michael J. Falotico
9th-end: me 

:)

* Always a pleasure to collaborate with him :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/22/2011 9:57:00 PM
It's so nice how Michael did this poem with you, Dinda. You did a great job collaborating together.
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Date: 11/14/2011 8:35:00 PM
The two of you sound like one person, so two minds must be better than one. A wonderful collab from both of you.
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Date: 11/11/2011 3:44:00 PM
* “Well, I Come to Admire Deeply Michael's Precious Heart & Gifted Verse * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Dinda * Tis Good to Find Another Such As Your Lovely Self Meshing Sooo Wonderfully Amid the Pleasant Twine In Verse * As Moments Ago Mentioned Unto Another * Love Can Become As A Hearts Battlefield * Exceptional Expressions * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 11/11/2011 1:38:00 PM
You two work wonderfully together : )
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Date: 11/11/2011 8:08:00 AM
Wow what an ambitious collaboration. I really enjoyed it. Tony
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Date: 11/11/2011 7:43:00 AM
Enjoyed this collab.Poem very much.Thanx for reading and commenting at my page.
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Date: 11/11/2011 7:33:00 AM
ANother piece of poetry and friendship that grows... A absolute pleasure to work and create with you hun.... with love Michael
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