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Region of Famine

Thirsty shadow crawls, While the tree reaches for rain; Earth cracks from the drought.

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Date: 7/3/2009 7:20:00 PM

marvellous..

Date: 7/1/2009 4:15:00 AM

each line is such wonderful eye-candy! Raul, mmmmmm!!!! and thanks for warm comments, Jim

Date: 6/30/2009 1:05:00 PM

Super Haiku Raul>>James

Date: 6/30/2009 9:59:00 AM

Nicely done Haiku Raul. One of my favorite forms. You surely do it justice. Love, Carol

Date: 6/30/2009 9:08:00 AM

Summer at its worst in a few words. Thanks for your contests. Love, Joyce

Date: 6/30/2009 12:02:00 AM

What a scene of desolation. Nicely worded, man.

Date: 6/29/2009 2:09:00 PM

Like your Haiku. The earth is longing for the rain here. Sara

Date: 6/29/2009 12:48:00 PM

wonderful work once again Raul...

Date: 6/29/2009 10:48:00 AM

Sad haiku here Raul but, you described it well, we haven't had rain in at least 3 months. Very dry and hot here.

Date: 6/29/2009 10:41:00 AM

I like the tree reaching for rain ... and how is my friend today ... I see the master still toils at excellence.