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Regimented Line

They came together as a parade In single line a formation Regimented, and so they stayed With reclined heads And glimmering helmets Their eyes cast upon the ground At the funeral of the road Their hope and courage Shone in the face of adversity As the first glimmer of dawn Crept up between the teeth of the city And even if their faces were cast down Where they looked, without a frown All could see All were guided To the point of perspective On car roofs reflective TARNDAI Daniel Human FIND THE PUZZLE! 7 October 2014

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Date: 10/10/2014 10:30:00 PM
Beautifully penned poem, congrats on the top win, Daniel
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Date: 10/10/2014 9:22:00 PM
Congratulations. This is a wonderful poem. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 10/10/2014 7:44:00 PM
I love the personalization, and the direction you took this one! Well done!!
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Date: 10/10/2014 6:35:00 PM
Very original and well deserved #1 Daniel...congrats
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Date: 10/10/2014 6:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win Daniel.
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Date: 10/10/2014 5:40:00 PM
Daniel, congratulations on your high marks in the contest. Verlena
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