Regaining Warmth

thoughts 
wrap me 
in warmth
this wind 
tries
to break
them free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 7:32 AM
Your poems are wonderful, this one in brevity says so much!
Adams Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 12:07 PM
Thank you for such a kind comment Caren :) hugs
Wolves Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 8:07 PM
In Pennsylvania the sunshines bright with clouds of cotton white blue skies mislead the unwary unaware of the chilled winds speed.
Adams Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 8:49 PM
so very true... those skies can be deceiving and can change course with those winds without warning...
Foster Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 6:17 PM
I get the chills reading this... ty... woke me right up.. great write. Power in simplicity. Ann
Adams Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 6:20 PM
Thank you my friend... that wind is bone chilling cold today... glad i am finally inside away from it... hugs
Godwin Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 6:04 PM
Bad wind - surely it is actually trying to make them adhere or send them on to manifest. Well, maybe? Great imagery and feel from free verse, Sandra - my first sentences are just me being a brat, plus, I do want the wind to whip your dreams into reality with the help of all divine universal ingredients! Always a joy ... CayCay
Adams Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 6:07 PM
lol...these winds have been crazy...off and on since monday, i have a long walk from the bus to my car and back to the bus...you can't idle more than five minutes, it's a law and they are programmed to shut down, so i shiver and write my little bus scribbles... Thank you my sweet friend... hugs
Ligon Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 6:02 PM
Hold on tight. Poetic hugs.
Adams Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 6:08 PM
lol... thank you Juliet...sometimes it will almost knock you over... hugs
Green Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 3:13 PM
Simply beautiful my friend. Enjoy that warmth even if the winds hope for a different outcome. I may just stay here a bit and relax in the warmth of your words.
Adams Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 6:04 PM
Thank you so much my friend...you may stay and relax as long as you wish...i have to get creative to stay warm these days...we keep getting these crazy winds out of nowhere... bone chilling cold... sigh...i want summer already! Have a good evening Chris,... hugs
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