Refuge of Quietude

One's thought is fleeting like a breeze drifting in the space as if seeking for something, wouldn't it be a refuge of quietude?
04/04/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sankey- Lewis Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 6:56 PM
Aaah, this is delightful read with gem at the end. Bless you.
Callus Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 7:00 AM
Fleeting breezes and quietude are very suitable companions; I love moments like these! ~ Regards // paul
Gazbowski Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:06 AM
Lovely write. Thoughts are energy forms, and energy can't die - so where do they end up ?!
Gazbowski Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 1:54 PM
My pleasure :-)
Flower Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Hi Lenny. Let's leave the question unanswered to the rest of the readers, while someone is waiting for the result of the contest. Thanks for inspiring me. :)
La France Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Moon, very deep and quite wonderful, I love this 7 ~
Flower Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 9:56 PM
Thank you, Broken Wings. Nice to see you motivating someone who's just new here. :)
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