Refreshing Rain

When you are unwell
And your body is weak
Worries hang over you
When it's solace that you seek

No matter how hard you look
For quietness and peace
Your jangled nerves
And aching limbs
Refuse to cease

Feeling very sorry for myself
As miserable as I can be
There is nobody, but nobody
Can feel as bad as me

I've talked to myself all day,
Saying I could feel much worse
Nothing I can think of
Can remove this curse,

I sat looking out of the window,
Frowning and with disdain
When it suddenly started to rain softly
Down the window pane

I was mesmerised as the rain,
Commenced to fall
Harder and harder
Bouncing off the wall

And making puddles everywhere
It was so calming
It was easy to sit and stare
With the changes to the garden

The rain was bringing there.
Everything looked brighter
New and fresh and clean
Like all traces of dullness
And dust had never been.

Sitting in the chair,
I woke up suddenly
There was peace in the air
That natural view gave me

I now understand if I take time to rest,
I will be able to cope if I try my best.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/21/2023 7:36:00 PM
Rain helped you to rest; it brought out your best. Hey, you could listen to recordings of rain. Seriously. I've found them quite calming myself...
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Date: 3/21/2023 7:25:00 AM
Rain definitely has the power to change one's frame of mind, Shirley. Nothing like a slow soaking rain to calm one's nerves. An ehjoyable read.
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Date: 3/20/2023 10:28:00 PM
Lovely poem Shirley! I love the rain it has amazing positive power…it makes me feel safe! Soupmail….Debx
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