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wave lapping at shoreline rhythmical sound meditative, soothes a restless spirit

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2011 7:53:00 PM

even reading it is refreshing!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/14/2011 10:51:00 AM

Carol, you described the sounds I hear from my home at the beach so well. When I go out and sit on the sand, the rhythm of the waves always brings serenity. Very nice work! Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/13/2011 9:19:00 PM

You could paint this wonderful poem, Carol. Awesome. Harry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/10/2011 2:43:00 PM

Lovely pen picture of the waterside, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2011 2:20:00 PM

It does that for sure...Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Dana Smith

Date: 3/10/2011 12:55:00 PM

:) I really like this.