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wave
lapping
at shoreline
rhythmical sound
meditative, soothes a restless spirit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 7:53 PM
even reading it is refreshing!
Devonshire Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 10:51 AM
Carol, you described the sounds I hear from my home at the beach so well. When I go out and sit on the sand, the rhythm of the waves always brings serenity. Very nice work! Love, Carolyn
Horsman Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 9:19 PM
You could paint this wonderful poem, Carol. Awesome. Harry
Mehta Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 2:43 PM
Lovely pen picture of the waterside, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 2:20 PM
It does that for sure...Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Smith Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 12:55 PM
:) I really like this.
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