Manny Paras Poet Free verse

Refrain On the 6th

How he cherishes her under globule of night
This man, trembling, burning in the round moonshine
But she would flee from his every blazed approach---

Heaven glitters as new moon changes into a silver orb,
Now, it is womanly flame encircling him like a viper
Under globule of night, they pursue each other.


6th June 2016
Contest--The Best Of 6 by nette onclaud
Visual 3

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Teddy Kimathi June 8, 2016 at 3:35 PM Congrats Manny, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Bl Devnath June 8, 2016 at 10:48 AM Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Congrats on your superb win. Loved always, bl

Kai Michael Neumann June 7, 2016 at 1:35 AM I like that. Well done and congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2016 at 7:22 PM BIG congrats , you Did GREAT.

Laura Leiser June 6, 2016 at 4:58 PM Great interpretation, Manny! Congrats on your top win :)

Jan Allison June 6, 2016 at 4:41 PM Dropping back with my congrats Manny:-) hugs jan xx

CayCay Godwin June 6, 2016 at 4:33 PM A beautiful and emotional write. Congrats on your win ... CayCay

Nette Onclaud June 6, 2016 at 4:05 PM i never thought of that visual as a moon, notwithstanding the cat-and-dog chase that excites... sweet congrats on your no.1 slot, manny... huggs

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2016 at 3:34 PM you did well with this,Manny. Wish I had time to see more. I can't win this contest because Soup would not allow me to enter her contest and then she ran out of spots. Unless she can open the contest back up, I am doomed to nothing!!

Jan Allison June 6, 2016 at 6:53 AM wonderful imagery Manny I like your interpretation of the image - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx