Refrain On the 6th

How he cherishes her under globule of night
This man, trembling, burning in the round moonshine
But she would flee from his every blazed approach---

Heaven glitters as new moon changes into a silver orb,
Now, it is womanly flame encircling him like a viper
Under globule of night, they pursue each other.


6th June 2016
Contest--The Best Of 6 by nette onclaud
Visual 3
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 6/8/2016 3:35:00 PM
Congrats Manny, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/8/2016 10:48:00 AM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Congrats on your superb win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/7/2016 1:35:00 AM
I like that. Well done and congratulations.
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Date: 6/6/2016 7:22:00 PM
BIG congrats , you Did GREAT.
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:58:00 PM
Great interpretation, Manny! Congrats on your top win :)
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:41:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Manny:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:33:00 PM
A beautiful and emotional write. Congrats on your win ... CayCay
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:05:00 PM
i never thought of that visual as a moon, notwithstanding the cat-and-dog chase that excites... sweet congrats on your no.1 slot, manny... huggs
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Date: 6/6/2016 3:34:00 PM
you did well with this,Manny. Wish I had time to see more. I can't win this contest because Soup would not allow me to enter her contest and then she ran out of spots. Unless she can open the contest back up, I am doomed to nothing!!
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Date: 6/6/2016 6:53:00 AM
wonderful imagery Manny I like your interpretation of the image - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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