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Refrain On the 6th

Reflected in a silvered mirror lies a lustrous crystal bauble Beguiling bribe veiled to eyes adrift in denial Atonement for his guilty heart, a souvenir of that marbleized moment when love rolled away Brilliant gullion jewel, beribboned and returned to giver, Lustrous crystal bauble, no longer mirrored in glassy tears 6/6/16 The Best of 6 visual #3

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Date: 6/8/2016 1:23:00 PM
Greeetings Marti. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 6/8/2016 10:42:00 AM
Excellent poem read from you. Geniously crafted. Congratulation on your superb win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/7/2016 1:33:00 AM
Many congratulations. Guillon and berribboned. Well done
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Date: 6/6/2016 11:28:00 PM
Excellent,Marti. Congratulations on your top spot. ~karam~
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Date: 6/6/2016 7:16:00 PM
wow, and amazing number one poem and win, Marti. I sure enjoyed seeing this!!
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Date: 6/6/2016 5:27:00 PM
Clever theme and brilliant story based on that visual, Marti. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:57:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Marti :)
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:40:00 PM
Lovely interpretation of the visual congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:30:00 PM
Extraordinary slant indeed, 6 lines packed with emotive imagery. Well done and congratulations ... CayCay
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:01:00 PM
wow, this is a fluent story in 6 lines... congratulations on your top win in my contest, marti.. extraordinary slant on the theme..huggs
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Date: 6/6/2016 8:00:00 AM
Nice!
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