Marti Sutherland Poet Free verse

Refrain On the 6th

Reflected in a silvered mirror lies a lustrous crystal bauble
         Beguiling bribe veiled to eyes adrift in denial
           Atonement for his guilty heart,  a souvenir
      of that marbleized moment when love rolled away
   Brilliant gullion jewel, beribboned and returned to giver,
Lustrous crystal bauble,  no longer mirrored in glassy tears


6/6/16   
The Best of 6   
visual #3

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Teddy Kimathi June 8, 2016 at 1:23 PM Greeetings Marti. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Bl Devnath June 8, 2016 at 10:42 AM Excellent poem read from you. Geniously crafted. Congratulation on your superb win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Kai Michael Neumann June 7, 2016 at 1:33 AM Many congratulations. Guillon and berribboned. Well done

Karam Misra June 6, 2016 at 11:28 PM Excellent,Marti. Congratulations on your top spot. ~karam~

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2016 at 7:16 PM wow, and amazing number one poem and win, Marti. I sure enjoyed seeing this!!

Sandra Haight June 6, 2016 at 5:27 PM Clever theme and brilliant story based on that visual, Marti. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra

Laura Leiser June 6, 2016 at 4:57 PM Congrats on your top win, Marti :)

Jan Allison June 6, 2016 at 4:40 PM Lovely interpretation of the visual congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin June 6, 2016 at 4:30 PM Extraordinary slant indeed, 6 lines packed with emotive imagery. Well done and congratulations ... CayCay

Nette Onclaud June 6, 2016 at 4:01 PM wow, this is a fluent story in 6 lines... congratulations on your top win in my contest, marti.. extraordinary slant on the theme..huggs

Mike Hauser June 6, 2016 at 8:00 AM Nice!