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Refrain On the 6th

"Help me find the little bouncy pearl", granny urged "rolled right through my enclosing palm jumping the rolls and hillocks of the blankets into the darkness under this bed!" I scoured each nook and shadow to recover the little bouncy pearl—the cod-liver oil pill! Written on 06/05/2016 for Nette's contest "The Best of 6" Visual #3

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Date: 6/6/2016 4:31:00 AM
A different unique take:) All the best:)
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/6/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Jo!

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