Sandra Haight Poet Free verse

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Refrain On the 6th

A Tiny Sphere


Our earth, our world, though just a tiny sphere,
you shine most fine among the rest,
defined with life of varied forms that are
the only ones we know of now.
In maze of cosmic dust how rich you are...
a tiny sphere...our mammoth world.


Sandra M. Haight

~4th Place
Contest: The Best Of Poetry 6
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Judged: 06/06/2016

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Afolabi Muideen June 7, 2016 at 3:57 PM Good luck in the contest friend...... Excellent write........A.M. Sandra Haight June 12, 2016 at 8:58 AM Thank you very much, Afolabi. I appreciate your visit and positive comments. Sandra

Karam Misra June 7, 2016 at 8:07 AM Congratulation, Sandra. Always loved the Mote in God's Eye concept. Nice to be back to congratulate you. ~karam~ Sandra Haight June 12, 2016 at 8:57 AM Thank you very much, Karam. Sandra

David Mohn June 6, 2016 at 8:24 PM congrats Sandra...love your perspective on this Sandra Haight June 12, 2016 at 8:56 AM Thank you very much, David. Much appreciated! Sandra

Laura Leiser June 6, 2016 at 5:07 PM Congrats on your win, Sandra :) Sandra Haight June 12, 2016 at 8:55 AM Thank you so much, Laura. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison June 6, 2016 at 4:50 PM Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs jan xx Sandra Haight June 12, 2016 at 8:55 AM Thank you, Jan. Hugs, Sandra

Nette Onclaud June 6, 2016 at 4:48 PM how pleasant and glorious is this, sandra, with a lovely voice to boot.. love the tiny sphere against a mammoth world.. big congrats on your fine win in my contest.. huggs Sandra Haight June 12, 2016 at 8:55 AM Thank you so much, Nette. I enjoyed your contest and appreciate my nice placement on your list. Hugs, Sandra

Janis Medders Tobechi June 6, 2016 at 4:34 PM Congratulations on your placement in the contest with this well written poem... Sandra Haight June 6, 2016 at 4:41 PM Thank you so much, Janis. Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars June 6, 2016 at 4:25 PM Sandra, beautifully expressed dear lady :) you are so gifted :) congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo Sandra Haight June 6, 2016 at 4:37 PM Thank you very much, Luloo! Hugs, Sandra

Sara Kendrick June 6, 2016 at 1:18 PM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..I really like the picture chosen for inspiration..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Richard Lamoureux June 6, 2016 at 8:07 AM Great imagery! I suspect this will do well. Sandra Haight June 6, 2016 at 9:20 AM Thank you so much, Richard! Sandra

Karam Misra June 6, 2016 at 4:11 AM Good take, Sandra. All the best for the contest. ~karam~ Sandra Haight June 6, 2016 at 9:21 AM Thank you very much, Karam. Sandra

Bl Devnath June 5, 2016 at 1:42 PM Excellently done my lovely friend. i loved much "Our earth, our world, though just a tiny sphere" where the size of the whole universe is concerned and related beautifully to mammoth world. With beautiful 7 good luck. Loved always, bl Sandra Haight June 5, 2016 at 3:55 PM Thank you very much, BL, for your supportive comment and nice rating. Yes, when I see pictures or our galaxy within the universe...I am simply in awe of the magnificence we have here on earth on a tiny dot that can hardly be seen. God's miracle...Sandra

Balveen Cheema June 5, 2016 at 1:05 PM So sweetly written, Sandra! Sandra Haight June 5, 2016 at 1:30 PM Thank you, Balveen! Hugs, Sandra

Miraj Raha June 5, 2016 at 12:25 PM Sandra Ma'am this is profound.I also wonder how mammoth is the earth,yet it is only a tiny sphere in the Universe. Sandra Haight June 5, 2016 at 1:31 PM Thank you again, Miraj. I am pleased that you can identify. I am in constant wonder about this Universe of ours! Sandra

Jan Allison June 5, 2016 at 11:12 AM Beautiful lines Sandra - i have written about the same image but a totally different take on the theme:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Sandra Haight June 5, 2016 at 1:32 PM Thank you, Jan. I know yours will be great! Hugs, Sandra