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''Refracted Reflection''

Some may write Some stay still Hand still not standing Mind of it's own will Written about them more than I care to admit Feet getting jealous Ready to throw their fit Humor I try Though now and again I do not get a deny Their laughter and smile I do long to see Reflections offering something different Pieces of the mirror Refracted pieces missing of me Different people Diluted images stop to say hi A simple glance Regrettably regretting Though this not good bye 374 days since I saw her smile''But whose counting'' ''JustDoc'' ''We'' kicked round one of stage three in the throat Round two was a demon Round three,Our Father brought her back Home Miss you ''PeeWee''

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/24/2016 11:07:00 PM
Hello Jai, it's been a long time. and I am back to pick up and read some of your poem. I'm deeply moved by your write and the way you express how what you went through, it's not easy. Thank you for sharing. LINDA
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Jai Bankson
Date: 3/21/2017 10:12:00 PM
Thank you so much stranger.....What is that star youg lady...lolNOLA
Date: 8/16/2016 4:25:00 PM
Sorry to hear of your loss. And also sorry that this is such a belated note. I just was looking through the list of people who follow me and noticed I hadn't seen any poetry from you lately, so came by to check how you were doing. Hope the sun shines a little brighter for you everyday.
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Jai Bankson
Date: 3/21/2017 10:15:00 PM
Thank you sweetie.Haven't been able to write in 7 months.Just started attempting last night.Hopefully something will come out.Plenty to write.Just seem to have lost my pen...?..
Date: 8/7/2016 1:51:00 PM
When we lose a loved one we also lose some pieces of ourselves. But, we shouldn't let that be the only reflection of us... An expressive poem, Jai, and so very moving... Nicely written!
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Date: 7/27/2016 4:31:00 PM
So sorry to hear that you've lost somebody you love. Very nice poem to express that lost and maybe help you heal.
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Date: 7/27/2016 2:37:00 PM
- Touching poem, Jai - Well done - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 7/27/2016 12:09:00 PM
Cleverly written, Jai; refracted reflections can work wonders, especially for anyone searching for peace of mind. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 7/27/2016 9:51:00 AM
Hi, Jai... I'm very pleased with your double reflection. I was moved by your pen. I hope you find the peace of mind to heal. You have lots of passion here...Skat
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