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Reformation

I wrote a poem A long time ago It was full of despair And gray cloudy skies It made me cry I then saw a child Playing in a park Laughing and full of joy I wrote no more Of gray cloudy skies

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Date: 2/14/2022 10:20:00 PM
What a lovely read to my poetic heart today! Simple and elegant :)
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Date: 2/10/2022 5:29:00 PM
What a lovely and enlightening piece. Expressions of sadness change to joy! Beautiful!
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Date: 2/11/2022 9:24:00 AM
Thank You Franci. I really have made an effort to write more joyful type poetry these past couple of years during this never ending pandemic. I just published "365 Joyful Poems" which is about how I used my poetry to overcome these depressing times.
Date: 11/26/2020 7:11:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you will share more with us. I liked your first piece. It brought about a new way of thinking during a gray, gloomy time.
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Date: 11/27/2020 6:01:00 AM
Thank You Milton, I am new to this and am still trying to navigate the system. However, due to the pandemic and all the political ranting I decided to write 365 feel good poems without using any sad or discouraging words over the course of 365 days. This is but one of them. tks again
Date: 11/25/2020 8:51:00 AM
Great first post welcome to poetry soup..
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Date: 11/27/2020 6:03:00 AM
Thank You Silent One.

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