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poem submitted to "Reflection(s) on Childhood Day(s), Sara Kendrick, sponsor, 9/17/2026

Reflections on Becoming a Lady-in-Waiting (SK)

Lavender clung to Grammy like a familiar blessing,  
a soft aura rising from her walk-in closet~  
that kingdom of faux furs and pearlized buttons  
where dresses hung like quiet stories waiting to be told.  

I sat beside her at her dressing table,  
watching the slow choreography of her bronze-brown hair  
as she brushed it into its practiced sweep,  
each stroke a reminder of the elegance she carried  
long after her hand-model days had faded from magazines.  

She tore two sheets of paper poudre,  
handing one to me as if passing down a secret rite.  
“Gently,” she said, and I followed her movements,  
feeling the powder lift whatever childhood dust remained  
from my ten-year-old cheeks, leaving them soft, matte, new. 

Foundation, rouge, a whisper of plum on her lips~  
then her porcelain hands folded mine inside them,
their warmth steady, their touch feather light.   
“You’re a lady now,” she said; in that moment, I believed her~  
believed I was becoming her lady-in-waiting,
one beautiful enough to be part of her gracious royalty.
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Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2026 at 5:48 AM
I was delighted to see your name on my winners' list. Congratulations to you. Way to go. Sorry I am so late at saying my congrats, I have been under the weather since Wednesday. Sara K. 👏✍️
Smith  Avatar
September 18, 2026 at 1:45 AM
A tender, beautifully paced free-verse memory, rich with tactile detail and gentle ceremony. The lavender, powder papers, pearlized buttons, and “slow choreography” of Grammy’s grooming create an intimate world in which femininity is lovingly inherited. The closing image of becoming her “lady-in-waiting” is especially moving—childlike, reverent, and perfectly suited to the grandmother’s quiet royalty.
George Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 9:12 PM
This sweet encounter with your granny is so alive before me. Your granny, I believe must have been so meticulous about her appearance... a lady of grace. Glad you have grown into a lady of her expectations!
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