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Reflections of Love

Reflections of Love I see you far away in the distance reflecting my love's illumination conquering the dark shadows in my heart you draw closer ever near you see me Peace and light dwell within united hearts our lighthouse of love shines bright in this world July 12,2016 For Laura Loo's July poems contest

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/14/2016 10:12:00 AM

such a beautiful poem John and the shape reminds me of a lighthouse or lamp :-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton
Date: 7/14/2016 10:22:00 AM

Thanks Jan, shape is a result of enforced syllable count rules, but it is an interesting form that I'm kind of liking. Thanks again. John

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/14/2016 8:53:00 AM

Thanks for reading and considering my poem "Being Human' for your contest..Sara

John Hamilton
Date: 7/14/2016 10:20:00 AM

Thank you for your entry, why not try my new contest sure you would do well. John

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/14/2016 8:08:00 AM

This is simply perfect true love and such great use of the form too:)

John Hamilton
Date: 7/14/2016 10:19:00 AM

I really loved yours it was outstanding hope it does well in the contest. Thanks for your constant encouragement, it is much appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/12/2016 8:33:00 PM

Very nice, John, wonderful flow perfect syllable count.

John Hamilton
Date: 7/12/2016 8:49:00 PM

Thanks Eve, was a great idea, i enjoy the form will maybe try more.