John Hamilton Poet Tetractys

Reflections of Love

Reflections of Love

                                                     
                                                       I
                                                  see you
                                                  far away
                                              in the distance
                                  reflecting my love's illumination
                           conquering the dark shadows in my heart
                                              you draw closer
                                                  ever near
                                                   you see
                                                      me
                                                    Peace
                                                  and light
                                                dwell within
                                               united hearts
                       our lighthouse of love shines bright in this world



July 12,2016 
For Laura Loo's July poems contest

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Jan Allison July 14, 2016 at 10:12 AM such a beautiful poem John and the shape reminds me of a lighthouse or lamp :-) hugs Jan xx John Hamilton July 14, 2016 at 10:22 AM Thanks Jan, shape is a result of enforced syllable count rules, but it is an interesting form that I'm kind of liking. Thanks again. John

Sara Kendrick July 14, 2016 at 8:53 AM Thanks for reading and considering my poem "Being Human' for your contest..Sara John Hamilton July 14, 2016 at 10:20 AM Thank you for your entry, why not try my new contest sure you would do well. John

Joanna Daniel July 14, 2016 at 8:08 AM This is simply perfect true love and such great use of the form too:) John Hamilton July 14, 2016 at 10:19 AM I really loved yours it was outstanding hope it does well in the contest. Thanks for your constant encouragement, it is much appreciated.

Eve Roper July 12, 2016 at 8:33 PM Very nice, John, wonderful flow perfect syllable count. John Hamilton July 12, 2016 at 8:49 PM Thanks Eve, was a great idea, i enjoy the form will maybe try more.