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Reflections of a Broken Heart- Collaboration With Heidi Sands

I sit at the water’s edge
  With my lone reflection to see
 What happened to our pledge?
  Now, will never come to be

  My tears ripple in water below
    No more skipping stones
  Pain from memories I know
   Slowly seep into my bones

  As the waves ebb and flow
    On heartaches from a distant shore
  I wonder if you know
That I will miss you evermore

  And the sadness in my heart
Will echo through the years
  And yet again will start
The rippling of tears

Waves of pain come over me
 As dark clouds hover above
   Tears blurring vision, I can hardly see
 How can I endure this loss of love?

  My reflection distorted,  now unknown
 As if I lost myself as well
   I fear what my broken heart has sown
 In this sorrow that within me dwells
                 ~~
 7/14/17

 Acknowledgements:
 My thank and appreciation to Heidi for sharing
 her poetic voice with me. As always, it has been 
 a pleasure working with you Heidi.
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 2:06 PM
Wow! Fabulous poem, Joseph. You and Heidi penned a wonderful romantic poem. Great collab from two uber talented poets. Both voices sing as one on this heartfelt stellar write. Pure poetry. Love and peace always.
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July 26, 2017 at 6:34 PM
Thank you Freddie
Teagan Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 10:49 PM
Joseph this is so good! I feel the pain and loss. A great collaboration!
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July 26, 2017 at 6:33 PM
Thank you Becca
Wanter Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 6:35 PM
You all are interwoven like a fine Navajo blanket. I really enjoyed this. "I fear what my broken heart has sown in this sorrow that within me dwells." When love is lost, sorrow is found.
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July 26, 2017 at 6:33 PM
Thank you Sunlite
Sands Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 6:07 PM
Thank you Joseph for the enjoyable collaboration once again. You are a great writer :)
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July 14, 2017 at 6:26 PM
Thank you Heidi, You are a great writer as well..it was great doing this poem with you..
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