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reflections in water -

early morning
as day blinked its eyes
I rowed a little dory out - smooth rivulets
behind me in the mirror surface
I stopped in the middle
wrapping the misty silence around me
straining to remember the
town as it had been

yes, it would be
about here - the cemetery -
they moved all the
graves they could before the deluge
but many remained
for age or obscurity's sake

it was there
she first kissed me
we went daily for the quietus and privacy
to do afternoon homework
(and split the atom)
there, friendship became ... more
like crocuses rushing to spring
we bloomed under the
brooding arms of a grumpy elm
branches twisting as if
to keep our callow sins a secret
so precious, those moments -
so ... distant

now - a flood and
a lifetime later - it all decayed
in the merciless murk ...
an entire town given to the abyss
for the thirst of a city
miles away
not a thought given to our
town's tragedy
no laurel laid upon these
somber depths

the feelings I
pondered there in stillness
had no precedent
half my life and countless memories
swimming far below
in unforgiving darkness -
homes, streets, schools, churches
gardens of stone ...
drowned for progress and
population

now, I committed
a like crime -
fishing my wallet from a corduroy pocket
I removed her photo from
its honored sheath
(where it had slept for years)
placed it ever-so-tenderly on the
lake's surface, and
watched it slowly lilt to the inky
depths, with my youth ...

and her memory.


~ For Jane Yolen ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 1/17/2022 2:02:00 PM
This is wonderful, Greg! Very well-written! An enjoyable read! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/16/2022 6:37:00 PM
Fantastic. Just a great ride from start to finish.
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Date: 1/16/2022 11:07:00 AM
Bitter sweet memories set adrift and released. Brilliant Greg! Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/16/2022 7:18:00 AM
Very emotive, expressive and descriptive work you have penned in this one. I can feel the sadness. Congrats on your work being in the winner's list. Sara
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Date: 1/16/2022 6:36:00 AM
Indeed, a great work. "with my youth... and her memory." - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/21/2021 8:31:00 AM
What a story/write. I loved your picture and wonderful ending. Have a Blessed Christmas.....................
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Date: 11/23/2021 6:40:00 PM
Greg my friend, your poetry always stays in the top class as if born by one of the great golden poets of old. Such constant level of exceptional poetry must come from a master poet, imho. Always a true pleasure to read. A fav,, God bless..
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Date: 11/22/2021 7:52:00 PM
This one moved me. I feel your pain and emptiness as you contemplate the past. Nicely written, this projects the feelings of seemingly senseless loss quite well.
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Date: 11/16/2021 11:45:00 AM
Hello Gregory Barden, this is a lovely way to say good bye to a love one. enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 11/16/2021 6:38:00 AM
Brilliant! I believe I'd read this before - ? It seemed that I could remember... Beautiful either way. God bless you, Love, Gina
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