Reflections Ii

Sunlight,backlit through glass
Raindrops,glistening on grass
Faces,smiling in a crowd
Words of love ,said aloud.
Thoughts on paper,strayed
Thankfulness,in prayers made
Mirror images,truth portend
Poetry in stanzas,penned
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loving Iii Avatar
February 15, 2009 at 1:04 PM
good one! John H Loving III
Gass Avatar
February 5, 2009 at 4:29 AM
This is lovely, Brian. It creates such soft and beautiful images in my minds eye. A lovely way to begin the day. Thank you always for sharing. Love, Robin
Reynolds Avatar
February 5, 2009 at 2:28 AM
Wow, we are on the same reflective wavelength Brian! I just posted my poems for the day, and now I see this with the same title - great minds you know. ;) beautifully reflective, all of it, love, Kristin
Moreno Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 10:01 PM
Great use of imagery Brian, I enjoyed this one...Raul
Gorelick Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 12:28 PM
This is a great one...it should be published..it s really so wonderful. BG
Omaidin Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 11:41 AM
What a wonderful piece of writing, so meaningful. I would almost learn it by heart. Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín
Winter Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 9:21 AM
Such a happy, peaceful write. Beautiful imagery to boot. Wonderful to read. Love, Shar
Wiggins Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 8:50 AM
nice piece brian. . ~many blessings~ *Breana
Faulkner Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 8:39 AM
this is a great piece. great thing to read at the begining of the day. love and peace james
Jordan Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 8:38 AM
Hi Brian - excellent poem Brian very creative and full of imaginary - God Bless, MJ
Richards Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Love this one...one for my fav's...has such a peaceful feel. (from what we are hearing, there may be snow on the grass from your window, rather than rain!) ~ Carrie
Degenhardt Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 8:01 AM
This has such a well defined flow to it as well as a clarity that truly speaks to the reader. Nice work my friend and thank you for your comments on my poetry. Michael
Ginn Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 7:59 AM
Oh this is such a good feeling poem, really nice Brian. Laurie
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