Reflections From a Toiling Sonneteer

One’s poetry not always will unfold beneath its author’s pen as some suppose. And poetry one is to yet behold might slowly bloom before one plucks that rose. At times the lines come breech, the labor hard. A trial of thought; a repositioning of words emerging, offspring of the bard! And then at last, the poet’s heart will sing. The poet must write always, lest his mind grow barren, for not always can he know his muse will be there. She’s not always kind, but oh, the joy, when verses want to flow! 1/8/13 For Russell Sivey's Poetry About Poetry Contest
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Patrikar Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 6:53 AM
whoa.... amazing work! 'twas deserving win!! congratulations !
Bauer Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 12:41 PM
wow, you really nailed this one, andrea! it speaks to all of us who write on this site and your words sound so wise and shakespearean, even! bravo!
Gildersleeve Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 1:06 PM
Congrats on your big win. A wonderful write my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie
Sefunmi Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 7:51 AM
This is so true Andrea! Congrats on your win!
Gasun Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 7:18 AM
So glad to read again one of your poems which I do love most! Congratulations on your well-deserved top win my dear friend, Andrea! love/hugs, Leonora
Widjanarko Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 5:02 AM
What a great poetry :) congrats on your win :)
Squyres Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 7:15 PM
love it !! My favorite is the second verse .... it is so true about the heart singing when it is written.. Congrats on your win
A  Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 7:07 PM
congrats :-) SKAT
Nair Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 4:51 PM
Congrats, Andea, on this top win with this awesome poem!! Jag
Arowolo Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 4:00 PM
Splendid and awesome piece,Andrea..Congrats on your well deserved 1st place...Good job,great friend..I`m doing very fine..And thanks for stopping by my poems...XOXO...You are special always...
Smith Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 2:56 PM
Congratulations! A well deserved first place!
J.T. Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 12:57 PM
Congrats on a winning poem! - JH
Wilson Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 12:28 PM
this is beautiful ...congratulations Andrea!...love,Deb
May Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 11:33 AM
congrats on a fine win Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 11:32 AM
fav verse 2 [we are creators and so we give birth] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Lamoureux Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 11:14 AM
Great win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 10:44 AM
Well there more congratulations, I will just have to have a stamp made for you ...well done love it xx
Ali Bhat Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 10:20 AM
oh !!! the joy of those flowing words...only we poets can understand....congrats on ur well deserved win....:))
Babcock Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 8:54 AM
that went to a fav. Phyl
Babcock Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 8:53 AM
you say this so well. Yes we want those verses to flow freely and I find it painful sometimes as words will not come and the harder I think the harder it is to write. Sometimes I give up for a while and then suddenly I am back in form. love phyl
Duncan Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 7:07 AM
Oh yes, how awesome it is when the verses want to flow ;} love it Andrea ;} thank you for reading Willow tree.
Horsman Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 5:27 AM
beautiful Andrea,,, love to see this re written as a sonnet, i'm sure would enhance an already amazing poem....
Poet Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 5:55 AM
My mind is barren now:(.Beautiful poem on the contest theme.
Austin Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 10:09 AM
You said it! I am one of those toiling and finding it difficult to contact the muse. Mikki McDonald said my stuff sounds depressed. Well, the depression is because I can't find the illusive old muse. Love, daver
Gasun Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 8:50 AM
This is an outstanding write my dear Andrea! I'll take it as my fav., if you don't mind. This is a winner for sure. Thank you so much and wish you all the best and luck always! love/hugs, Leonora
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