Read aloud here
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=KsiR4ADm69M
dim dim is the eye sweet once were the hours fate has been joined bliss bliss farewell the night hides love in a blanket of sounds evolving evoking tranquility to depart footsteps in my mind endlessly emotion memories that sway wait then delay on repeat phrases no comfort from yesterdays one day follows the other as a passing cloud to tomorrow
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