Reflections

Deep into the pool
A blue moon,ephemeral,
Below white-coated peaks,
Bleak and surreal,
The transient image too soon
Dissolves,and ripples into space,
As water though my grasp.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Jordan Avatar
February 5, 2009 at 6:19 PM
Brian - always a pleasure to read your poetry - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
Scripca Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 4:29 PM
Beautiful imagery. I close my eyes and see myself next to a lake admiring the world upside down. Congrats!
Swanson Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 4:08 PM
Very beautiful! You have painted a clear and lovely picture for us, true word-art. :) Congrats on getting featured this week! Blessings, Amy :)
Brown Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Rider Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 8:12 AM
...as water through my grasp...what grabber! Love the imagery. Congratulations on being featured! Trudy
Austin Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 5:19 AM
Good image...good write. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
Ehigiator Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 8:42 PM
Beautifully written with amazing imagery, Congratulations on this lovely piece being featured this week..God Bless you and best wishes to you in your writing*Tyesha
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 12:01 PM
Congratulations Brian on "Reflections" being featured this week. Vince
Winter Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 11:38 AM
Gosh Brian, this is magnificent. Congratulations on your amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace