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Reflections

Just recently, upon a winter, so long, so cold, so mean I stopped to reflect upon summers past; so warm, so bright, so green I stumbled about a darkened house; made dim by a raging storm outside. I thought about the warmth of spring; the joy and comfort of my bride. I paused before a mirror; gaze upon the reflection of my aging face. I think of times now long gone by; ponder why time does so quickly race. I wondered at the twists of fate; the path that brought me here. I remember my many friends and family; folks I continue to hold so very dear. I think about the distant past; the generations that have gone before I realize that the likes of me and mine; are what they were living for. I ponder on one question; the real meaning of my life I give thanks for all the good things; especially for my loving wife. I am thankful for my children; now with children of their own. As we grow older, to face the future; but hopefully not alone Oh so hopefully not alone.

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Date: 8/31/2014 4:31:00 PM
It is indeed gratifying to see how each other's words can apply to common recollection. You struck the right chords in creating a symphony of words..... well done.... Jake
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Date: 1/22/2014 12:56:00 AM
I am so glad you shared it. it reminded me of one that I wrote for some friends and I just posted it. Golden Years. Connie
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Date: 1/22/2014 12:28:00 AM
Hi Donald, I took you up on your offer to view reflections and it is a great tribute to love and the generations. Thank you for sharing this lovely verse. Connie
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 1/22/2014 12:53:00 AM
You are welcome. I wrote this piece several years ago and was one of the fist poems I ever wrote down.
Date: 12/8/2013 8:05:00 PM
Donald,, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda
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Date: 12/2/2013 8:50:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Donald
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 12/2/2013 11:41:00 AM
A special thanks to all who have commented on this piece.
Date: 12/2/2013 7:58:00 AM
A wonderful poem, so appreciated by the aged..(me)..I would have placed this higher. BG
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Date: 12/2/2013 6:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win Donald. I love how you write with so much passion....Roger
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Date: 12/2/2013 5:45:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Donald !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/31/2013 8:24:00 PM
one glance in the mirror can bring back so many thoughts...time surely has a way of speeding along...like the way you analyze the house and storm and bring it all together so nicely...nice write... thanks for pointing me to it :)
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 11/2/2013 12:14:00 AM
Thank you for your comment on this. Now I invite you to view "Time's Advances" in my folder.
Date: 8/2/2012 2:58:00 PM
To think of time gone by, and ponder why time does so race.. We have definitly lived two entirely different existances. not a bad thing, I have about 60 completed writes; however I'm afraid people will be either scared for me, of me or just not understand.. I did love this piece by you, though.. Thanks TC
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