William Kelii Kekaula Poet Haiku

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Reflections

*Image of/by Excited Cats.

reflections 

the sly black cat crept
aisle mirror caroms pierced eyes~~
arrest hunched hissing

2022 April 06
*1st Place*
Black Cat Haiku
~~Robert James Liguori: Judged 2022 April 07

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Andrea Dietrich April 8, 2022 at 8:27 PM Big congrats on your top win, my friend. William Kelii Kekaula April 9, 2022 at 10:42 AM Thanks aplenty, Andrea, blessings my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex April 8, 2022 at 4:10 AM Dramatic haiku. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula April 8, 2022 at 9:37 AM I am grateful to you, Christuraj, thanks a lot my friend, Aloha~William

Valsa George April 7, 2022 at 8:37 PM Great description to match with the image.... the cat hissing at its own reflection ! Congratulations on your great win, William ! William Kelii Kekaula April 10, 2022 at 11:46 AM Sorry I forgot to post but instead went directly to your page to comment on one of your poems and did not return--A blessed heartfelt gratitude I extend to you, Valsa, for your wondrous generosities my friend, Aloha~William

Ann Peck April 7, 2022 at 10:47 AM A wonderful Haiku, Hilo Poet! I can see your cat hissing at its reflection. :) I had a cocker that would growl and bark at its reflection in glass door. Congratulations on your First Place win! William Kelii Kekaula April 7, 2022 at 3:06 PM I welcome your kind expressions, Ann, and your wonderfully shared thoughts my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith April 7, 2022 at 10:35 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "reflections" is a wonderful black cat write. Great picture. Have a blessed day........................ William Kelii Kekaula April 7, 2022 at 10:56 AM Unbeknownst to me but a hearty thanks for the know, Paula, and as always, a blessed day back at you my friend, Aloha~William