Reflections

Reflections   by Lisa Baron                  October 2020 


The night you died
The sky was smoky blue
Cool air, a mix of still and breeze
Cows laid down for rain
The edge of loss is undefined
Yet quiet, deafening, peaceful
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Agustin Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 12:36 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Wolf Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 5:30 PM
Intriguing images, Lisa. Please write on! Hope and Happiness, Gershon
Baron Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 5:42 PM
Thank you Gershon.
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