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I stand staring into the water. Battling the light, fighting past shadow. Fleeting images skate along glass. Uncertainty, doubt, nothing is plain. Curious orange, glinted, then gone. Rippled concentration, I frown. Birds fly through a crocodile cloud, then disappear into the grass. A dragon-fly conducts a detailed inspection. Pond-weed beckons, come closer...come closer... Dark depths hide many mysteries. A giggle blown on the breeze, I smile. Death, bloated, stares up accusingly. A pond-skater pauses to read the nursery logo. Another comes to confirm. Crocodile jaws close over their meeting. Apple-blossom, blue sky, black tyre-swing. Nature's reality painted on glass. A raindrop explodes on the surface. Another, another, a battleground of ripples. Distorted images echo my thoughts. I stand. I stare. I drown.

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Date: 9/24/2020 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a story/write. Enjoy your win and day.........
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Date: 9/24/2020 6:20:00 AM
'Ceinwen, Congratulations on your top placement! David'
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Date: 9/24/2020 3:17:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 9/23/2020 9:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Date: 9/23/2020 8:51:00 PM
An amazingly captivating write. I had to read it twice to reach it's full depth into the void. Congrats on your first place win.
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Date: 9/23/2020 5:55:00 PM
Ceinwin, CONGRATS on your top win with this vividly descriptive piece. Janice
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Date: 9/23/2020 5:47:00 PM
Ceinwen, I am virtually sitting by this pond. The apt crocodile cloud, and repeat reference to depict closure is awesome. Raindrops explode, pondweed beckoning, mysteries. The entire tone of your wonderful work is intriguing. Will be checking your work tonight. Huge Congratulations on a very deserved Win, Ceinwen!
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Date: 9/23/2020 5:12:00 PM
Thank you, love this creation. Congrats.
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