Reflections

I stand staring into the water.
Battling the light, fighting past shadow.
Fleeting images skate along glass.
Uncertainty, doubt, nothing is plain.
Curious orange, glinted, then gone.
Rippled concentration, I frown.
Birds fly through a crocodile cloud,
then disappear into the grass.
A dragon-fly conducts a detailed inspection.
Pond-weed beckons, come closer...come closer...
Dark depths hide many mysteries.
A giggle blown on the breeze,
I smile.
Death, bloated, stares up accusingly.
A pond-skater pauses to read the nursery logo.
Another comes to confirm.
Crocodile jaws close over their meeting.
Apple-blossom, blue sky, black tyre-swing.
Nature's reality painted on glass.
A raindrop explodes on the surface.
Another, another, a battleground of ripples.
Distorted images echo my thoughts.
I stand.
I stare.
I drown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 11:40 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a story/write. Enjoy your win and day.........
Drowley Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 6:20 AM
'Ceinwen, Congratulations on your top placement! David'
Agustin Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 3:17 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Roper Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 9:31 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win.
Mcgee Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 8:51 PM
An amazingly captivating write. I had to read it twice to reach it's full depth into the void. Congrats on your first place win.
Canerdy Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 5:55 PM
Ceinwin, CONGRATS on your top win with this vividly descriptive piece. Janice
Ermine Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 5:47 PM
Ceinwen, I am virtually sitting by this pond. The apt crocodile cloud, and repeat reference to depict closure is awesome. Raindrops explode, pondweed beckoning, mysteries. The entire tone of your wonderful work is intriguing. Will be checking your work tonight. Huge Congratulations on a very deserved Win, Ceinwen!
Carmack Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Thank you, love this creation. Congrats.
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