Reflection

Looking in the mirror she whispered to herself Where did you go Once upon a time she used to be happy Now stuck on this Plateau Filled with whispers of nostalgia From the past A tear rolled down her cheek Wondering how long this would last The long crack running down the glass Resembled her broken heart But there was still beauty within her Like an Exquisite piece of art I may not find who I was, But I will find who I am, All this pain will make sense one day I will understand Become stronger learn from each experience Life is short each decision has significance...

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Chris Green

Date: 3/21/2017 12:05:00 PM

This was fantastic. So descriptive are your lines that I felt this as I read it. I loved the line about the crack in the mirror resembling her broken heart. That was so cool. One more..."I may not find who I was, but I will find who I am" I wish I had written that and the ending, uplifting and positive. Nicely crafted.

Sofia Ra
Date: 3/21/2017 12:23:00 PM

Thank you so much for the encouraging words, it is truly appreciated my friend.