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Written following my mother's transition from her earthly home to her heavenly home on December 3, 2012.

By Valerie D. Staton My mind swims with thoughts of yesterday... a day of unrelenting anguish and fist pounding sorrow a day never to be forgotten a day never to be relived again... a day my heart, like a vase hurled against a granite wall, shattered into a million pieces... the day mother closed her eyes for the very last time

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Carl Fraser

Date: 2/22/2016 6:01:00 PM

A whole barrage of emotions come out when you lose someone close to you. It has happened to me twice now so I understand your pain. God will comfort you and heal your heart. Blessings Carl

Valerie Staton
Date: 2/23/2016 1:45:00 AM

Thanks Carl for your thoughtful words of encouragement. God bless you and keep you.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/18/2016 10:19:00 PM

I feel your words..."a day of unrelenting anguish and fist pounding sorrow" love that line... fist pounding sorrow is an awesome phrase. And that last line definitely punches. Excellent composition. Always, Laura

Valerie Staton
Date: 2/20/2016 8:56:00 AM

Thanks Laura! I had never lost anyone close to me. I never imagined her gone in the physical sense. It is still quite hard because I saw her everyday. It gives me comfort to know that death is not the end of our journey. May God forever bless you and keep you.

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/31/2015 12:07:00 PM

judging from your words' worth....your mother was a Blessing to this Earth....and for her you must carry on the same....because as long as you do, the world will know her name....Beautiful and heartfelt tribute....you should check out my poem called Death....it will touch you....;)

Valerie Staton
Date: 2/20/2016 8:48:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate your support. May God bless you and keep you.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/24/2015 7:01:00 PM

This poem is a touching piece. I'm sorry for your loss .It's heart breaking to loose a loved one. I lost my dad 10 years ago and that was a devastating time for my family.You never get over the loss hower you just learn to live with out them . The blessing is they live on through us. I'm glad I stopped by to read this 7 piece.. Alexis

Valerie Staton
Date: 5/24/2015 8:52:00 PM

Thanks Alexis for your kind words. Sorry for your loss as well. God bless you and your love ones.

Darlene Gifford

Date: 5/24/2015 11:23:00 AM

I am sorry for your loss, Valerie. You've written a powerful poem, lines 5 and 6 really brought it home. I no longer have my mom or dad or other family members either, since I am in my advanced years. And when I lost my son to illness when he was 13, that was devastating! So I can relate to your poem. A 7 rating. Blessings, Darlene

Valerie Staton
Date: 5/24/2015 6:43:00 PM

Thanks for your kind, endearing words. Sorry for your loss as well. May God bless you and keep you.