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Reflection

The moonlight reflecting the red in your hair Your jacket pulled tight, a slight chill in the air Few words are spoken, a wide distance apart Looking to the stars, the ground, somewhere to start Our hands touch softly, gently, our fingers entwined I whisper, my life, my love, my one true friend Please tell me not that this is our end

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Date: 4/16/2009 6:39:00 AM
Congrats on this selection. It doesn't sound like this is the end, Christian. Let's hope not. Love, daver
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Date: 4/15/2009 10:58:00 AM
Nice rhyme Christian and congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 4/14/2009 1:55:00 PM
Lovely flow and a delicately written poem. Very nice.
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Date: 4/14/2009 12:03:00 PM
This flows well. It has excellent rhyme throughout. Very nice. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week.
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Date: 4/13/2009 4:05:00 PM
This one has me smiling. I like the lighthearted feel to this love poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/13/2009 2:55:00 PM
This is poignant and so beautiful. Congratulations to you, for touching this place in my heart.
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Date: 4/13/2009 10:38:00 AM
Congrats Christian on your beautiful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/13/2009 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured in the future. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:42:00 AM
Congrats on being featured this week...Aleera
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