Reflection

The moonlight reflecting the red in
your hair

Your jacket pulled tight, a slight chill
in the air

Few words are spoken, a wide
distance apart

Looking to the stars, the ground,
somewhere to start

Our hands touch softly, gently, our
fingers entwined

I whisper, my life, my love, my
one true friend

Please tell me not that this is
our end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Austin Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 6:39 AM
Congrats on this selection. It doesn't sound like this is the end, Christian. Let's hope not. Love, daver
Moreno Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 10:58 AM
Nice rhyme Christian and congrats on your feature...Raul
Augustus Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 1:55 PM
Lovely flow and a delicately written poem. Very nice.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 12:03 PM
This flows well. It has excellent rhyme throughout. Very nice. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week.
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April 13, 2009 at 4:05 PM
This one has me smiling. I like the lighthearted feel to this love poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen
Joseph Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 2:55 PM
This is poignant and so beautiful. Congratulations to you, for touching this place in my heart.
Winter Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 10:38 AM
Congrats Christian on your beautiful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
Brown Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 6:22 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured in the future. Love, Carol
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April 13, 2009 at 5:42 AM
Congrats on being featured this week...Aleera
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