Reflection

I am beautiful.
Humble words…mirror my soul,
Poetic journey…
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Poetic journey…
Humble words…mirror my soul,
I am beautiful.

on writing and wordschoka

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Hana Ryusaka

September 17, 2009 at 4:43 AM

I loved this concept. This really is your form! Great job and keep writing!

John Weber

September 16, 2009 at 11:50 AM

Wonderful, cyclical thought put to paper here, Raul! I always appreciate how well you work within forms, and this proves no exception! Warm regards, John.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

September 16, 2009 at 5:11 AM

Superb, Raul, ... absolutely!!!

Karla Null

September 15, 2009 at 8:50 PM

yes you are!...Karla

Abe Lopez

September 15, 2009 at 10:39 AM

A great concept Raul..... well written and humbely spoken.......

Doris Culverhouse

September 15, 2009 at 7:32 AM

nicely penned

Robin L. Gass

September 15, 2009 at 5:10 AM

Raul, your talent and creative imagination reflect beautifully in this. I love the depth of your words and the like Brian said the classic feel of it. Excellent work, my talented friend. Love, Robin