Breana Wiggins Poet Rhyme

Reflection

Who is this girl that stares back at me?
There's so much pain in her eyes
So many scars across her arm
So much hurt in her life
She doesn't know her worth
Or is she worthy at all?
She feels she is the one to blame
For her father not loving her

Who is this girl that stares back at me?
There's so many tears in her eyes
Fears in her life
She wants out of this world 
Out of her life

Who is this girl that stares back at me?
Who doesn't smile at all?
Is this really me in this mirror on this wall?......

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Ngoubdo Babagana December 15, 2008 at 1:32 PM I first want to say stand proud beause you are a strongh women, because if you made it this far you are worth morethan you know. stand tall because if you survived that you can survive any thing. god bless and once you findyour self and all the wonderful things about you NEVER let them bring you down. and i do love your poem

James Stevenson December 15, 2008 at 1:09 PM Ive been reading your stuff and they say pain is the makeing of a good poet , I would say you felt a lot of pain in your life , when I write I let it go ,as do you from what I've read. very good stuff . James .

Colin Mitchell Williams December 13, 2008 at 10:00 AM Perhaps Breana you don't realise, the strength it takes, to look into that mirror, or the courage it takes to write these words, its a funny thing how we can never see our bravery and strength until someone points it out to us...normally we just see it as our sadness or weakness.. but in truth, if you look carefully you will find a rare and precious honesty that many people do not have or even contemplate...

Robin L. Gass December 13, 2008 at 8:52 AM A very soulful write. Very touching and sad. I relate so well to your poems. Good job on expressing yourself. Keep on writing! Love Robin