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Reflection

Look at me, you will see yourself
Maybe a little shaky, with my ripples…
But, clear nonetheless
Do you feel the peace I offer you?
Is it showing on your face?
Does my movement along the shore soothe you?
I offer laps of sound to listen to, one by one
Or maybe you will want to take a dip with me
Come in, cool off!
Dive into the reflection of yourself
Come out renewed!
I am here, I am waiting
For you to be cleansed
And walk away with freedom!

Heidi Sands

3/26/19

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Joseph May Date: 4/4/2019 1:22:00 PM A beautiful personification Heidi..Very nicely penned Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/4/2019 2:33:00 PM Thank you Joseph :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/30/2019 2:26:00 PM A wonderful personification poem Heidi - I love these kind of poems as you can really use and allow extreme imagination and fantasy to rule you! Well done, Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/31/2019 8:53:00 AM Thank you Jennifer. I appreciate your comment :)

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/30/2019 9:42:00 AM Hi Heidi, I do love walking by the water. Your excellent write does give it a voice, a calm, joyful voice. A personification of water could be a personification of your heart. I love the content and the strong images your words do convey. A beautiful write Heidi. A Fave. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/30/2019 12:24:00 PM Thank you so much Mike. I hope you have a nice Saturday too :)

Supraja Kannan Date: 3/30/2019 9:22:00 AM How beautiful! Such a lovely imagery, Heidi. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/30/2019 12:24:00 PM Thank you. I appreciate your comment :)

Ralph Sergi Date: 3/30/2019 7:47:00 AM You expressed a beautiful manner for the ocean to call you. I loved it! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/30/2019 8:08:00 AM Thank you Ralph :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/28/2019 2:46:00 PM - A nice poem, Heidi ... so friendly and lovely :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/28/2019 4:44:00 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. I appreciate your kind comment on this :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/28/2019 2:10:00 AM Beautiful imagery, and shows off your readiness and willingness to become one with the sea too, Heidi. I love this! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/28/2019 9:41:00 AM Thank you very much Caren. I was just being water in this personification and actually had a lake in mind lol. It becomes what people want it to be. I appreciate your kind comment and I'm happy you love it :)

Eve Roper Date: 3/27/2019 8:04:00 PM perfect personification, Heidi. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/27/2019 9:31:00 PM Thank you very much Eve :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/27/2019 3:42:00 PM we see ourselves in others... splendid poem, heidi... huggs Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/27/2019 7:50:00 PM Yes, true. I am trying to personify being the 'water'. Thank you Nette. I appreciate your kind support :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/27/2019 12:58:00 PM Profound and peaceful poem with a poetic breeze touching the heart dearest Heidi! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/27/2019 7:50:00 PM Thank you Demetrios. :)

Ann Gilmour Date: 3/26/2019 7:19:00 PM Such a soothing description of the sea Heidi, my most favourite place to be and I am so lucky to live beside it. The sea gives me such solace at times of stress and the ebb and flow of the tide just washes my worries away. Thank you for this beautiful personification Heidi, a FAV for me for sure! Kindest thoughts Ann xx Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/26/2019 7:28:00 PM Thank you for your kind thoughts and feedback. I am happy you enjoyed this and consider it a Fav. Take care :)

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 3/26/2019 1:11:00 PM This lovely poem is a reflection of you, Heidi! Love the imagery. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/26/2019 6:26:00 PM Thank you Sandy. I was only doing personification with the water lol . :)

Paul Callus Date: 3/26/2019 12:21:00 PM Such a lovely and uplifting poem, Heidi!This is also a reflection of your lovely and positive character. Regards // paul Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/26/2019 6:26:00 PM That is nice of you to say Paul. I appreciate it. I was only trying to personify the water . Thank you :)

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/26/2019 10:19:00 AM No greater peace then looking into the ripples of the waters and your soul reflection. Nice poem Heidi, Have a beautiful day x Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/26/2019 10:45:00 AM Thank you Pixie. :) Have a nice day!

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/26/2019 9:03:00 AM WOW! This is really good..a splendid reflection.. charming imagery. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/26/2019 9:46:00 AM Thank you very much Vijay :) I hope you have a nice day today!