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Reflection


Look at me, you will see yourself
Maybe a little shaky, with my ripples…
But, clear nonetheless
Do you feel the peace I offer you?
Is it showing on your face?
Does my movement along the shore soothe you?
I offer laps of sound to listen to, one by one
Or maybe you will want to take a dip with me
Come in, cool off!
Dive into the reflection of yourself
Come out renewed!
I am here, I am waiting
For you to be cleansed
And walk away with freedom!

Heidi Sands

3/26/19

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Date: 3/30/2019 2:26:00 PM
A wonderful personification poem Heidi - I love these kind of poems as you can really use and allow extreme imagination and fantasy to rule you! Well done, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/31/2019 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 3/30/2019 9:42:00 AM
Hi Heidi, I do love walking by the water. Your excellent write does give it a voice, a calm, joyful voice. A personification of water could be a personification of your heart. I love the content and the strong images your words do convey. A beautiful write Heidi. A Fave. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 3/30/2019 12:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Mike. I hope you have a nice Saturday too :)
Date: 3/30/2019 9:22:00 AM
How beautiful! Such a lovely imagery, Heidi.
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Date: 3/30/2019 12:24:00 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 3/30/2019 7:47:00 AM
You expressed a beautiful manner for the ocean to call you. I loved it!
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Date: 3/30/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Ralph :)
Date: 3/28/2019 2:46:00 PM
- A nice poem, Heidi ... so friendly and lovely :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/28/2019 4:44:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I appreciate your kind comment on this :)
Date: 3/28/2019 2:10:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, and shows off your readiness and willingness to become one with the sea too, Heidi. I love this!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/28/2019 9:41:00 AM
Thank you very much Caren. I was just being water in this personification and actually had a lake in mind lol. It becomes what people want it to be. I appreciate your kind comment and I'm happy you love it :)
Date: 3/27/2019 8:04:00 PM
perfect personification, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/27/2019 9:31:00 PM
Thank you very much Eve :)
Date: 3/27/2019 3:42:00 PM
we see ourselves in others... splendid poem, heidi... huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/27/2019 7:50:00 PM
Yes, true. I am trying to personify being the 'water'. Thank you Nette. I appreciate your kind support :)
Date: 3/27/2019 12:58:00 PM
Profound and peaceful poem with a poetic breeze touching the heart dearest Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/27/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios. :)
Date: 3/26/2019 7:19:00 PM
Such a soothing description of the sea Heidi, my most favourite place to be and I am so lucky to live beside it. The sea gives me such solace at times of stress and the ebb and flow of the tide just washes my worries away. Thank you for this beautiful personification Heidi, a FAV for me for sure! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2019 7:28:00 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts and feedback. I am happy you enjoyed this and consider it a Fav. Take care :)
Date: 3/26/2019 1:11:00 PM
This lovely poem is a reflection of you, Heidi! Love the imagery.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2019 6:26:00 PM
Thank you Sandy. I was only doing personification with the water lol . :)
Date: 3/26/2019 12:21:00 PM
Such a lovely and uplifting poem, Heidi!This is also a reflection of your lovely and positive character. Regards // paul
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2019 6:26:00 PM
That is nice of you to say Paul. I appreciate it. I was only trying to personify the water . Thank you :)
Date: 3/26/2019 10:19:00 AM
No greater peace then looking into the ripples of the waters and your soul reflection. Nice poem Heidi, Have a beautiful day x
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2019 10:45:00 AM
Thank you Pixie. :) Have a nice day!
Date: 3/26/2019 9:03:00 AM
WOW! This is really good..a splendid reflection.. charming imagery.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2019 9:46:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay :) I hope you have a nice day today!