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Reflecting On Youth

Written: September 29, 2023 No 1245 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand _________________________________________________________ Gray sky High cry It flakes Snowflakes To crawl In fall Landscape Reshape White sheets Such treats All time Kids mime Some sled The spread Some glide On side Ice fields Reveals Snowballs No walls Such cheer Is dear Sweaty Dainty

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Date: 10/1/2023 11:14:00 AM
So cute Las! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/30/2023 9:02:00 AM
Oh quite an intriguing form and so impeccably you've crafted this poem. The flow is so captivating and the wordplay is definitely intriguing with brilliant rhyming flow and assonance. The descriptions are so flawless throughout indeed! Loved reading this~
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Date: 9/30/2023 6:16:00 AM
The style. I like it. It is work that has taken place as I read. The choice of words commendable.
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Date: 9/29/2023 9:20:00 PM
That was a fun read. You must have been describing winter. As a child that was such a much better time of year than now as an adult.
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Date: 9/29/2023 7:57:00 PM
Wow! Lasaad, You painted such beautiful scene in the “ footle” form. Best in the contest.Have a good evening and wonderful weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/29/2023 7:27:00 PM
Fun! Good luck in the contest!
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