Sotto Poet Poet Footle

Reflecting On Youth

Written: September 29, 2023
No 1245 Poetry Contest                           Sponsored by: Brian Strand    
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Gray sky
High cry

It flakes
Snowflakes

To crawl
In fall

Landscape
Reshape

White sheets
Such treats

All time
Kids mime

Some sled
The spread

Some glide
On side

Ice fields
Reveals

Snowballs
No walls

Such cheer
Is dear

Sweaty
Dainty

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Linda Alice Fowler October 1, 2023 at 11:14 AM So cute Las! Congratulations! :)

Hiya Sharma September 30, 2023 at 9:02 AM Oh quite an intriguing form and so impeccably you've crafted this poem. The flow is so captivating and the wordplay is definitely intriguing with brilliant rhyming flow and assonance. The descriptions are so flawless throughout indeed! Loved reading this~

The Situation September 30, 2023 at 6:16 AM The style. I like it. It is work that has taken place as I read. The choice of words commendable.

Miranda Hawley September 29, 2023 at 9:20 PM That was a fun read. You must have been describing winter. As a child that was such a much better time of year than now as an adult.

Alexis Y. September 29, 2023 at 7:57 PM Wow! Lasaad, You painted such beautiful scene in the “ footle” form. Best in the contest.Have a good evening and wonderful weekend:-) Alexis

Karen Jones September 29, 2023 at 7:27 PM Fun! Good luck in the contest!