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Reflecting On a Puddle


reflect my dreams as you mirror your world
cool, still and dark
yet changing
with God's
breath




12/08/15

naturewatertetractys

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Andrea Dietrich

December 27, 2015 at 9:09 AM

Hey, let me know if I have missed any poem at all of yours. I am just clicking in circles and can't find one! Hope your Christmas vacy is awesome (or are you back to work now?)

Paul Callus

December 10, 2015 at 11:44 AM

I was astonished not to see this beauty on the winners' list, James! It's clever and beautiful. Keeping to the subject of mirrors and reflections, you also gave us a reflected image of a Tetractys! Well done! // paul

James Inman

December 10, 2015 at 1:11 PM

Thank you for the wonderful words, Paul. Whatever the reason for not placing, I respect Nette and her decision, as well as everyone else who hosts a contest, (I may have missed something in the contest rules, including not doing a reverse) and I love her poetry.