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Reflecting

a sky darkened to grape
lying in stillness. . . .
a lake of wine

the lake mirrors
wisps of twilight’s clouds above - 
a lilac trail

on the lilac trail
full white moon
a face glitters on water

deep purple water
moon in pomegranate sky. . . .
reflecting

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:29:00 PM

i feel the magic

Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 1:26:00 PM

ANDREA, AWESOME...SKAT

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/19/2014 5:45:00 AM

This poem has some beautiful imagery; a well-done poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2012 10:35:00 AM

A well deserved win for you in the #193 contest. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/5/2012 11:18:00 AM

WOW, what beautiful imagery! Congrats on your win, Andrea! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Fabiyas M V

Date: 8/4/2012 9:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win,Andrea.How do you do?

Debra Squyres

Date: 8/3/2012 10:09:00 AM

A lovely string of haiku !! I like that they all tie together so well....simply beautiful images !! Congrats on your wins !!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/3/2012 8:21:00 AM

Congratulations Andy xx

Sherese Gooden

Date: 8/2/2012 11:18:00 PM

Congrats Andrea.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/2/2012 5:47:00 AM

congrats Andrea on this super win .. for all your comments too.. I am going to hospital overnight for observation and tests for my head again.. and loss of vision now.. so thankxx for caring and concern.. going through a rough patch right now luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2012 5:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#193" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Joseph May

Date: 8/2/2012 5:41:00 AM

congrats on your win Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/28/2011 1:22:00 PM

Sorry Andrea I was away for teh weekend, your entry is perfect ..thank you for asking and supporting my contest..love Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2011 6:29:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea, on your well deserved win for your poem in Charles Henderson's contest "String Haiku". Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 2/20/2011 7:13:00 PM

This is extremely beautiful, Andrea. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/20/2011 12:12:00 AM

read your comments again :) haha we think so much alike-- that's how I chose my entry too ;) & yup looks like he really had noooo idea you wrote that ;) like what I keep telling you-- you are really talented missy-- free verse or not, you are a sparkling gem! hugs :)

Lisa Lee

Date: 2/18/2011 5:13:00 AM

This such a beautiful image! And thank you for your comment on "alarm cat". I lined it up but - it showed like you saw it. I think I fix it now. Anyway, thanks again.