Andrea Dietrich Poet Haiku

Reflecting

a sky darkened to grape
lying in stillness. . . .
a lake of wine

the lake mirrors
wisps of twilight’s clouds above - 
a lilac trail

on the lilac trail
full white moon
a face glitters on water

deep purple water
moon in pomegranate sky. . . .
reflecting

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Skat A May 16, 2015 at 12:29 PM i feel the magic

Skat A May 12, 2015 at 1:26 PM ANDREA, AWESOME...SKAT

M. L. Kiser February 19, 2014 at 5:45 AM This poem has some beautiful imagery; a well-done poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 9, 2012 at 10:35 AM A well deserved win for you in the #193 contest. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 5, 2012 at 11:18 AM WOW, what beautiful imagery! Congrats on your win, Andrea! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Fabiyas M V August 4, 2012 at 9:54 AM Congratulations on your win,Andrea.How do you do?

Debra Squyres August 3, 2012 at 10:09 AM A lovely string of haiku !! I like that they all tie together so well....simply beautiful images !! Congrats on your wins !!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 3, 2012 at 8:21 AM Congratulations Andy xx

Sherese Gooden August 2, 2012 at 11:18 PM Congrats Andrea.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 2, 2012 at 5:47 AM congrats Andrea on this super win .. for all your comments too.. I am going to hospital overnight for observation and tests for my head again.. and loss of vision now.. so thankxx for caring and concern.. going through a rough patch right now luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown August 2, 2012 at 5:44 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#193" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Joseph May August 2, 2012 at 5:41 AM congrats on your win Andrea

Michael J. Falotico February 28, 2011 at 1:22 PM Sorry Andrea I was away for teh weekend, your entry is perfect ..thank you for asking and supporting my contest..love Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 6:29 AM Congratulations Andrea, on your well deserved win for your poem in Charles Henderson's contest "String Haiku". Love, Carol

Elaine George February 20, 2011 at 7:13 PM This is extremely beautiful, Andrea. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 20, 2011 at 12:12 AM read your comments again :) haha we think so much alike-- that's how I chose my entry too ;) & yup looks like he really had noooo idea you wrote that ;) like what I keep telling you-- you are really talented missy-- free verse or not, you are a sparkling gem! hugs :)

Lisa Lee February 18, 2011 at 5:13 AM This such a beautiful image! And thank you for your comment on "alarm cat". I lined it up but - it showed like you saw it. I think I fix it now. Anyway, thanks again.

Robert Pettit February 15, 2011 at 5:08 PM Why didn't I see this entry earlier? Nice set of haiku that apparently Charles liked. Congratulations on winning in his contest.

Carolyn Devonshire February 15, 2011 at 12:15 PM Your recognition is well deserved, Andrea. Congratulations on your win in the string contest! Love, Carolyn

Eiken Laan February 15, 2011 at 8:49 AM Andrea, what wonderful images, I love the grape theme and purple colours throughout. Stunning haiku Congratulations.

Nette Onclaud February 14, 2011 at 10:02 PM sooo captivating, andrea with images of " pomegranate sky", " lilac trail"... BIG CHEERS of the wonderful win! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 14, 2011 at 7:45 PM Super congrats Andrea on your super win in the string Haiku contest with this brilliant beauty my friend.. enjoy with luv..luv..

John Freeman February 14, 2011 at 7:14 PM Smile. Congraulations Andrea on your excellent poem in Charles' inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta February 14, 2011 at 6:09 PM Congratulations onn the well deserved win in the contest, Andrea

Kash Poet February 14, 2011 at 6:08 PM Hi Andrea,congrats on your well deserved win in this contest!---kashinath

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