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Reflecting

a sky darkened to grape lying in stillness. . . . a lake of wine the lake mirrors wisps of twilight’s clouds above - a lilac trail on the lilac trail full white moon a face glitters on water deep purple water moon in pomegranate sky. . . . reflecting

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/16/2015 12:29:00 PM
i feel the magic
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Date: 5/12/2015 1:26:00 PM
ANDREA, AWESOME...SKAT
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Date: 2/19/2014 5:45:00 AM
This poem has some beautiful imagery; a well-done poem.
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Date: 8/9/2012 10:35:00 AM
A well deserved win for you in the #193 contest. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2012 11:18:00 AM
WOW, what beautiful imagery! Congrats on your win, Andrea! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/4/2012 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win,Andrea.How do you do?
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Date: 8/3/2012 10:09:00 AM
A lovely string of haiku !! I like that they all tie together so well....simply beautiful images !! Congrats on your wins !!
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Date: 8/3/2012 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations Andy xx
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Date: 8/2/2012 11:18:00 PM
Congrats Andrea.
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Date: 8/2/2012 5:47:00 AM
congrats Andrea on this super win .. for all your comments too.. I am going to hospital overnight for observation and tests for my head again.. and loss of vision now.. so thankxx for caring and concern.. going through a rough patch right now luv..
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Date: 8/2/2012 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#193" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2012 5:41:00 AM
congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 2/28/2011 1:22:00 PM
Sorry Andrea I was away for teh weekend, your entry is perfect ..thank you for asking and supporting my contest..love Michael
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea, on your well deserved win for your poem in Charles Henderson's contest "String Haiku". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2011 7:13:00 PM
This is extremely beautiful, Andrea. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/20/2011 12:12:00 AM
read your comments again :) haha we think so much alike-- that's how I chose my entry too ;) & yup looks like he really had noooo idea you wrote that ;) like what I keep telling you-- you are really talented missy-- free verse or not, you are a sparkling gem! hugs :)
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:13:00 AM
This such a beautiful image! And thank you for your comment on "alarm cat". I lined it up but - it showed like you saw it. I think I fix it now. Anyway, thanks again.
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Date: 2/15/2011 5:08:00 PM
Why didn't I see this entry earlier? Nice set of haiku that apparently Charles liked. Congratulations on winning in his contest.
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Date: 2/15/2011 12:15:00 PM
Your recognition is well deserved, Andrea. Congratulations on your win in the string contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/15/2011 8:49:00 AM
Andrea, what wonderful images, I love the grape theme and purple colours throughout. Stunning haiku Congratulations.
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Date: 2/14/2011 10:02:00 PM
sooo captivating, andrea with images of " pomegranate sky", " lilac trail"... BIG CHEERS of the wonderful win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:45:00 PM
Super congrats Andrea on your super win in the string Haiku contest with this brilliant beauty my friend.. enjoy with luv..luv..
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:14:00 PM
Smile. Congraulations Andrea on your excellent poem in Charles' inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations onn the well deserved win in the contest, Andrea
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:08:00 PM
Hi Andrea,congrats on your well deserved win in this contest!---kashinath
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