Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

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Red-Rimmed Glasses

We conveyed a constant view of the world.
That was not the correct way to bear it.
Yet, just in the manner in which we desired.
Through glasses that are red.
Our fellowship grew and thrived.
Our bodies and brains are intrinsically tied.
Those who are acutely attuned to one another.
Notwithstanding any hardship, we prevailed.
All of this has vanished instantly.
That is, in fact, your case.

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Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2022 at 7:28 PM I really like this. How did it vanish. ? Sotto Poet April 2, 2022 at 8:34 PM That is the correct question, Andrea, but because it is so uniquely distinctive, each person must discover the response that is most appropriate for him.

Victor Buhagiar April 2, 2022 at 1:57 AM Enigmatic but thoroughly enjoyable.

Reason A. Poteet April 1, 2022 at 6:55 PM As I finished reading your brevity piece, I am filled with questions and wonder. What happened at the beginning that was incorrect? What happened at the end to end it all? I can imagine any number of scenarios which might fit; hope you have come to grips with your own. That is the joy of writing about it.