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Rednecker Car Wash

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                                                   Pouring down rain
                                                 Dirty car on carporch
                                     Husband_back car out needs washing




(Non-traditional
Senryu)

funnyhusbandlifecarsenryu

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Matt Hunt

May 22, 2011 at 5:47 PM

Being from Arkansas, I have actually seen this done. True story, my friend broke his steering wheel on his boat. So instead of buying a new steering wheel, he decided to use something else. He took a broom handle and duct tape.....True story. Btw loved this non-traditional Senryu. Great job:D Matt

Wilma Neels

April 2, 2011 at 1:06 PM

Awesome one Sara, enjoyed tonight ;) Wilma

John Loving Iii

April 2, 2011 at 9:49 AM

hahahaha take the er off of redneck. john

Andrea Dietrich

April 1, 2011 at 11:09 PM

hahaha, reminds me of those rednecked jokes that one comic always tells.,.. You might be a redneck if you.....Good one, Sara.

James Foulk

April 1, 2011 at 12:02 PM

i worked for a car wash one time, i was there for 3 or 4 days and i left. because everytime it rain, we got sent home, so this poem i can relate to. i really enjoyed it.

Kash Poet

April 1, 2011 at 7:36 AM

You have captured the picture clearly in those three lines Sara.Nice write---kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 1, 2011 at 6:44 AM

Totally see this one clearly Sara.. glad u reposted it my friend.. free car wash is the good old rain.. I wash my car myself for exercise ..have to try it in the rain sometimes.. like today with the rain snow mix falling luv.. happy weekend with luv..

Elaine George

March 31, 2011 at 5:44 PM

Good one, Sara. Elaine

Carolyn Devonshire

March 31, 2011 at 12:10 PM

Hi Sara, you might want to delete this one because the other post of your poem has more comments on it already. Sometimes we encounter technical glitches and don't realize a poem has been posted twice. Love, Carolyn