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Redemption

In a sea of endless desire, I struggle to reach reality. I cringe at the thought of detriment. I scream from the bottom of my heart, matted with a string of false luxuries. Dread hangs from my lips. I strive to blink past the falsehood clouding my eyes. I hesitate to breathe along side you. A hum of hypocrisy pierces my ears. Your petty declarations so irrelevant now… a subtle reminder of senseless behavior. Tell me why it is you emerge so proud from the shadows of deceit? Your exorbitant tales linger in my mind. I crave redemption. You enticed me so successfully, for I was floating in oblivion. A vulgar decision coming from you, though I’m at fault for believing a reckless soul. How canny you were in the art of your game… but I crave redemption, and I will reach my destination.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/14/2010 4:04:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jessi. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/13/2010 4:03:00 PM
enjoyed reaidng today!! Welcome to poetry soup, and hope you find much inspiration.
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