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thrilled, arms outstretched, head held up high tasting cool rain 6/22/2022

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Date: 6/24/2022 1:59:00 PM
We do need that redemption now. I enjoyed reading this one. If it is for a contest, reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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Date: 6/23/2022 8:15:00 PM
Playing in the rain, sure to grow, all thing nature. love this Eve.
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Date: 6/23/2022 1:53:00 PM
Your poem Eve, brings back memories of hot summer school holidays out playing on dusty streets, when an odd shower came along we stood mouths agog trying to capture a few raindrops, a fantastic fun senryu, cheers David
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/23/2022 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, David. What fun it was when we were young. Bless you and have a great day
Date: 6/23/2022 10:14:00 AM
Amen to that, Sister!
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Date: 6/23/2022 1:40:00 AM
Children love to play in the rain. Hugs.
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Date: 6/23/2022 12:16:00 AM
I really can picture it
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