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Redeemed

She finds herself -in dreams - dwelling in a cozy place where nothing is elusive, and in these reveries, she finds him there with her. . .a different man. He isn't surreptitious, so not beset by doubt, she's not compelled to query him. He opens up to her, and she is loved. He finds himself - in dreams - living happy moments free to be himself, and in these reveries, often she appears. . . but unobtrusively, without her rain of questions pounding him. Instead, she smiles acceptance, inviting him to show himself to her, and he is loved. And in between the waking past and incubus of their reality, they dream in peace. . . together and redeemed. For the Free Verse Contest of Catie Lindsey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/25/2012 7:50:00 AM
Hmmmm Sounds like two people who still love each other but somewhere along the line something got messed up. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/22/2012 1:40:00 PM
See, you do rock at FREE VERSE!!!! Told ya! ha ha. I love this one! Keep free-versin', gal! Love, Gwendolen Hey,..will you scrutinize my cinqku? It's my 2nd one.
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:17:00 PM
ANDREA, THIS IS A SWEET WIN..ALWAYS..PD
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Date: 2/21/2012 3:04:00 PM
Andrea, This is a beautiful poem, I really enjoyed reading it. Congrats on placing on Catie's winners' list...........S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:55:00 AM
If only it were always this way. Anyway, beautiful poem you have here =).
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:28:00 AM
congrats Andrea on a terrific third place win for this outstanding and creative masterpiece of poetic art luv..
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in ~Catie's~ "Free Verse" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhh reminded me of a fav song Pina Colata? Congrad's dear Andie! Lovely win Light & love
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Date: 2/20/2012 3:48:00 PM
ah this is romantic thoughts within the dream realm. A jewel of a write. love phyl
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Date: 2/18/2012 3:01:00 PM
Got to score high with this Andrea,, soulful and intense......!
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Date: 2/17/2012 8:15:00 PM
wonderful words for this challening contest by Catie.. good luck Andrea.. the repeating lines are a strong fav of mine.. adds flavor to the thoughts integrated in piece luv.. another winning work of art..
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Date: 2/17/2012 6:08:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..What a dream for both of them to have..Wanting the other person to be someone they are not..Sad that only God and the other person can change them..Good luck in Catie's contest.. Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenitng on my work..No, I did not write Willow Skeletal for a contest just for myself..Sara
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Date: 2/17/2012 2:19:00 PM
Lovely Andrea, he dreams and so does she; hopefully they all come true. Wish you the best in the contest! :)
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Date: 2/17/2012 2:09:00 PM
Awesome write, my friend. A sure winner
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Date: 2/17/2012 11:26:00 AM
Redeemed indeed..a very lovely and romantic story poem,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you,Hugs!Vienna
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Date: 2/17/2012 10:56:00 AM
wow Andrea, as i read this, i see you as the woman here, and hubby as your man, hope i'm not wrong. so profound. harry
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Date: 2/17/2012 9:45:00 AM
A winner for sure Andrea.Last stanza is great.To see each others dream is a wonerful theme for your poem. Anne
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Date: 2/17/2012 8:43:00 AM
Sweet dream - like poem! Love & Peace Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/17/2012 6:19:00 AM
I love the separation of each persons thoughts and feelings, this really is a very nice piece, good in sight.
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Date: 2/17/2012 5:55:00 AM
I loved this lovely verse Andrea! I really enjoyed how you separated the man and the woman parts, very ingenious! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/17/2012 12:28:00 AM
Very nice free verse poem by you Andrea.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 2/17/2012 12:26:00 AM
What a fascinating metaphor! The last verse is splendid. An awesome read. ~ Chuck
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Date: 2/17/2012 12:22:00 AM
how are you today... I must say Andrea, i like your free verse style...good luck in the contest... always..pd
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