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Redamancy Poetry Contest
Redamancy means reciprocal love
Sedoka
It is a syllabic verse and, therefore, contains no rhyme or metre. It is a traditional Japanese poetic form consisting of two tercets (three-line stanzas/verses). Each tercet follows a specific syllable pattern: 5-7-7. Traditionally, the design format included the question in the first verse, and the reply/response in the second verse.

Redamancy
Stoned and thrilled I stared
Sweet lady mime I’m speechless.
A match made in Paradis?
Snapshots I kept near
Equal heartbeats in sync pound.
Ear-piercing pitter patters
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