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Redamancy Poetry Contest

Redamancy means reciprocal love
Sedoka
It is a syllabic verse and, therefore, contains no rhyme or metre.  It is a traditional Japanese poetic form consisting of two tercets (three-line stanzas/verses). Each tercet follows a specific syllable pattern: 5-7-7. Traditionally, the design format included the question in the first verse, and the reply/response in the second verse.

Redamancy

Stoned and thrilled I stared                  
Sweet lady mime I’m speechless.
A match made in Paradis?

Snapshots I kept near 
Equal heartbeats in sync pound.
Ear-piercing pitter patters
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Kalita Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 2:13 AM
It's difficult to pen sedoka dear and you are a master in the form. Thanks again for your detailed minute analysis on the recent post. Stay blessed Anaya
Anaya Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:53 PM
Thank you, Silpika! First time, yes. I have updated the Tree-Reality and put it to rhyme, as it was in article's form. Hope you are well in God's hands!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 9:46 AM
Fantastic poem. love is so deep. Blessings.
Anaya Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 9:57 AM
Thank you, Victor for your gracious support. xo
One Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 12:01 PM
You have such a creative mind that is so poetic.. always different ideas for contests, which you do so well...
Anaya Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 6:07 PM
:)
Kauffman Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 11:25 AM
Bon jour, Anaya! Ce poem est tellement fantaisiste. Ta dame est si tride! Charmant! Merci beaucoup! Benedictions a vous!
Anaya Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 6:02 PM
Bon jour, Sam! Thank you, blessings as well mademoiselle.
Gorelick Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Oh La La! La feme et très jolie, non? Edgy and fun! R.G.
Anaya Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Oui! Merci beaucoup, R.G.!
Rolland Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 10:26 PM
great poetry, you have such an imagination, the poem send me good vibrations and changing spirit, God bless you poet
Anaya Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 9:35 AM
Mon frère, delighted you found enchantement et féerie in my petit poem! Keeping love theme a little while longer. Merci beaucoup Yann. ~Mademoiselle Anaya
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