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Red Velvet

rose petals on breeze
a dress up gown for downtown
mouthwatering cake

a moonlit sunset
cushioned beauty and comfort 
voluminous drapes

noon butterfly's wings
garden of my bleeding hearts
flame trees and parrots
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Horsman Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 5:48 PM
Wow, so lovely is this.
Buehler Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 9:10 PM
Thank you, Harry.
Calasibetta Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 4:58 PM
Lovely images of your Haiku's. I especially like "a moonlit sunset" etc. Well done! Blessings, Paulette
Buehler Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 9:11 PM
Thank you, Paulette.
DiMino Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 4:53 PM
Very lovely images. Great write!
Buehler Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Thank you, Joe. Happy holidays. :)
Jones Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 1:01 PM
Your haiku skills are impressive. Always so brilliant.
Buehler Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 4:46 PM
Thank you for the joy of your comment, Karen.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 11:03 PM
Your descriptions are impeccable.
Buehler Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 8:42 AM
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. :)
Poet Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 4:55 PM
Great Haiku, Evelyn, We walk through life, and it isn't easy to stay out of all that comes our way. Fantastic metaphors.
Buehler Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:03 PM
Sometimes our travels lead us to unexpected delights. Thank you for your kind recognition, Lasaad.
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