Red Sun - Contest

The paintbrush swirls a circle 
in bright red alluring hue. 
Shadows surround in the sky
Rising, a new day



Contest  Red Sun
Penned 20 June 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 25, 2013 at 2:30 PM
Seren.... congrats *****SKAT
Jones Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 9:33 PM
Congratulations
Anglesey Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 5:57 PM
A portrait of the sunrise very nicely imaged. Congratulations on your win :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 2:05 AM
this is beautiful, and NOW I have some GREAT news for you on the plagiarist. See soupmail. I CAUGHT him
Roberts Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 3:03 AM
Well done Andrea, grr I hate cheats.....thanks for the comment ...Seren
Johnson Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 11:13 AM
Your an artist with your pen. Your imagery is almost Zen. :) Having trouble being able to post a poem on your boy and dog contest. Can't find the picture. Hope you can help. Thanks.
Roberts Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 12:17 PM
sent you a Soup Mail Robert. Thanks for the comment ......Seren
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 2:44 PM
this is REALLY good. I think your imagery rocks.
Horsman Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 3:41 AM
short and very sweet, love the visual, hope you are fine Seren....
Roberts Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 4:07 AM
lol not many lines to say what you really want but i have a go at different forms. Lovely to see you Harry....Seren
Poet Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 3:54 PM
:))))
Roberts Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 9:27 PM
Thanks Kass for your help.....Seren
Hamilton Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 3:25 PM
your words Seren paint a lovely picture Shadow x smiles
Roberts Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 9:30 PM
Hi Shadow, many thanks ....Seren.
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