Red Sun

reddish orange high light passion, vivid yellow beam mind stuck in the dreamy cloud rhythm of the sun contest red sun

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 3:57:00 AM

DX..... --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 1:54:00 AM

awesome...........................

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/5/2013 4:41:00 AM

Hi Dom, Nice write as it reminds me of the sunsets here in Biloxi off towards New Orleans..Thanks for the visit to my work.. Ken

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2013 12:14:00 PM

your poem is awesome... and thanks for the kick a$$ comment... luv~ Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/13/2013 9:57:00 AM

Enjoyed your very descriptive work...A form that has no meter or rhyme is easier than some forms..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/10/2013 6:18:00 AM

Free thoughts! Nice DX! jimbo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/9/2013 11:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem.

April Gabriella

Date: 8/9/2013 6:09:00 PM

Hi. :D I really just wanted to stop by and say "YAY Worf!" :):)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2013 5:16:00 PM

glad to finally see this one, and congrats for your win. The last two lines I liked a lot.

Erich Goller

Date: 8/9/2013 2:18:00 PM

Congratulation, a very colorful expressed poem. God bless you Erich

Skat A

Date: 7/25/2013 2:26:00 PM

DX .... congrats *****SKAT

Donna Jones

Date: 7/23/2013 9:25:00 PM

I like it...congratulations

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/23/2013 5:47:00 PM

Vivid descriptions passion and dreamy . Very well done. Congratulations on your win :)_

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/6/2013 1:32:00 PM

I really like this! :) Lovely descriptive words....Good luck..