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Red Sun

reddish orange high light
passion, vivid yellow  beam
mind stuck in the dreamy cloud
rhythm of the sun

contest red sun

Copyright © Dom- X- | Year Posted 2013

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Poet Destroyer A

December 24, 2013 at 3:57 AM

DX..... --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Poet Destroyer A

December 11, 2013 at 1:54 AM

awesome...........................

September 5, 2013 at 4:41 AM

Hi Dom, Nice write as it reminds me of the sunsets here in Biloxi off towards New Orleans..Thanks for the visit to my work.. Ken

Poet Destroyer A

September 3, 2013 at 12:14 PM

your poem is awesome... and thanks for the kick a$$ comment... luv~ Linda

August 13, 2013 at 9:57 AM

Enjoyed your very descriptive work...A form that has no meter or rhyme is easier than some forms..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

James Marshall Goff

August 10, 2013 at 6:18 AM

Free thoughts! Nice DX! jimbo

Richard Lamoureux

August 9, 2013 at 11:24 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem.

April Gabriella

August 9, 2013 at 6:09 PM

Hi. :D I really just wanted to stop by and say "YAY Worf!" :):)

Andrea Dietrich

August 9, 2013 at 5:16 PM

glad to finally see this one, and congrats for your win. The last two lines I liked a lot.

August 9, 2013 at 2:18 PM

Congratulation, a very colorful expressed poem. God bless you Erich

July 25, 2013 at 2:26 PM

DX .... congrats *****SKAT

July 23, 2013 at 9:25 PM

I like it...congratulations

July 23, 2013 at 5:47 PM

Vivid descriptions passion and dreamy . Very well done. Congratulations on your win :)_

Eileen Manassian

July 6, 2013 at 1:32 PM

I really like this! :) Lovely descriptive words....Good luck..

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