Red Sun

Cleopatera was warned Of the heated blood glowing Reflections from River Nile Red sun foreboding Written 6/30/2013 For the " Red Sun" Contest

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Sandra Adams

Date: 11/4/2013 8:36:00 PM

I haven't tried this form but you made it look fun...I could see the bloody water of the nile appearing before my eyes...nicely written Karen...lovely....hugs :)

Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/4/2013 8:41:00 PM

Sandra, I like new challenges in writing. Thanks for commenting. Much appreciated :)

Frank Polgar

Date: 10/23/2013 2:04:00 PM

Really like this poem. Will have to try writing something using this format.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 10/23/2013 6:11:00 PM

Thank you for the nice comment

Stephen Kilmer

Date: 7/27/2013 2:25:00 AM

Brilliant. Kilmer

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/27/2013 8:55:00 AM

Stephen, thank you for the generous remarks :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2013 12:40:00 AM

looking to see if this one got a win. And YES< good thing!!! Congrats. I really like this.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/26/2013 5:36:00 PM

Andrea, thank you

Skat A

Date: 7/25/2013 2:34:00 PM

Karen, .... congrats *****SKAT

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/25/2013 6:24:00 PM

SKAT, ....Thanks *******KAREN :)

Donna Jones

Date: 7/24/2013 8:11:00 PM

Oh I really love this...so different!..congratulations

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/25/2013 7:11:00 AM

Thank you Donna, your comments are much appreciated :)

Shirley Candy

Date: 7/8/2013 8:34:00 AM

Very symbolic...well penned, Karen.. Good luck with the contest.. :) ~Shirley

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/8/2013 5:24:00 PM

Shirley, Thank you :)

Karen Croft

Date: 7/7/2013 6:53:00 PM

Very nice! Good luck in the contest

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/7/2013 8:01:00 PM

Karen, thank you for reviewing :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/5/2013 7:00:00 AM

A unique approach for the contest Karen :) wishing you all the best for the contest! xx Wilma

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/5/2013 7:12:00 PM

Wilma, thank you for the nice comments :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/3/2013 8:15:00 PM

Good couplet here! Keep it up! Peace & Love! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/4/2013 9:50:00 AM

Matthew, thank you and peace & love back to you also :)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/3/2013 5:16:00 PM

Wow, Karen this is a fabulous take for the 'Red Sun' contest. It reads like it you be a winner. Warm Smiles, Connie

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/3/2013 6:37:00 PM

Connie, thank you for the encouragement :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/3/2013 8:31:00 AM

I like this piece with a historic twist.well done Karen.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/3/2013 6:36:00 PM

Richard, thank you for the nice comment :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/2/2013 10:12:00 PM

The Battle of Actium in 27 BC was quite a turning point in the history of Western Civilization. Nice write.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/3/2013 6:28:00 AM

Robert, I am thrilled that this conjured up such specific imagery for you. Thank you for sharing :)

Randy Curry

Date: 7/2/2013 8:15:00 PM

an a(s)pt ending to this write. few words, a lot said. ran

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/3/2013 6:27:00 AM

Randy, thank your for the comments :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2013 12:26:00 PM

a unique treat with a different take on the theme.. marvelous!..;) huggs

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/2/2013 5:20:00 PM

nette, thank you very much, I feel marvelous :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 7/1/2013 7:43:00 PM

Thank you for sharing this write love history and thank you for your comments.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/2/2013 5:19:00 PM

Cherl, thank you for commenting :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/1/2013 6:47:00 PM

interesting verse! Light & Love

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/2/2013 5:19:00 PM

Debbie, thank you ! :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/1/2013 2:36:00 PM

You picked a great subject and took different twist to this theme......I love it!!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/1/2013 5:36:00 PM

Carrie, thank you. Your words are as encouraging as your poetry is inspiring :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2013 7:47:00 AM

Nice and symbolic!!! Good luck in the contest.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/1/2013 5:35:00 PM

Andrea, thank you... I surprised myself with this. I think I could make it larger. Thanks for commenting :)

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2013 6:53:00 PM

Karen, love the reflection. I'm also glad you enjoyed your win in my contest. Thank you for sharing <3 ~SKAT~ <3

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/1/2013 5:34:00 PM

SKAT, thank you ! I am honored that you chose my poem in your Secrets contest. So rewarding! :)