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Red Sun

sunrise inflames the dawn sky, as if it is on fire clouds curl a blush cream, gives an unearthly sight For Russell Sivey's contest, "Red Sun"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2013 12:12:00 AM

Hope it won. I just saw the contest was judged and I was not on the list. But I bet this beauty made it on!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 7/25/2013 6:18:00 PM

Andrea , no I don't think it placed for a win, but thank you for thinking that it might have. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/29/2013 6:12:00 AM

Great visual! Connie! Thanks! Jimbo

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/29/2013 6:18:00 PM

Jimbo thank you for the kind comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/28/2013 8:04:00 PM

Have a look at the form. 7/7/7/5. Your content is good and with a bit of rearranging I am sure you could make it work. If you click on dodoitsu up above "about this poem" it offers an excellent example of the form. If I can be of help soup mail me. Thanks for you visit today and thoughtful comment.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/29/2013 4:21:00 AM

Richard thank you for the heads up. I believe the syllable count is correct now. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/28/2013 7:37:00 PM

ps......... a very lovely view. love the sweet look out tan, in your imagery... excellent... LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/29/2013 6:19:00 PM

Thank you Lind for your kind comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/28/2013 7:34:00 PM

Hello Connie, first I want to thank you for helping support the new poets when I had a contest especially for them.. :-) :-)... that was very nice of you. Hardly any one helped greet the winners. That showed me that you have a very tender heart... thank you many hugs... LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/29/2013 6:25:00 PM

I remember what it's like to be a newbie, and wanted to shout out a 'hallo to them. Thanks for your lovely and kind heart. I hope you're having a lovely weekend. Warm Smiles, Connie