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Red Sun

Rising red Sun ball of fire
                                                gleaming reddish reflection
                                                 a crown of two avalanches
                                                sends tender smiling beams

                                                     Beautiful adoration
                                                cherishing the Nature most
                                             swills the dark cloud by melting
                                                gives soft pleasure at dawn


                 

                                                  Contest name-Red Sun
                                                   
                                               Date of writing: 26/06/2013

Copyright © Bl Devnath | Year Posted 2013

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/28/2013 8:51:00 PM Hello BL., beautiful it is, the crown in the most glorious view... i find it as the best thing offered ... good luck in the contest... LINDA Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 6/29/2013 9:24:00 AM A lot of thanks again for your appreciation. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/28/2013 1:53:00 AM filled with bright imagery, BL Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 6/28/2013 8:12:00 AM A lot of thanks for your appreciation. Loved always, bl

Mario De Paz Date: 6/26/2013 11:37:00 AM This is a good poem with appropriate and quite well chosen words. It confirms the quality of your poetry which deserves my compliments Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 6/26/2013 11:44:00 AM Thanks a lot for your nice comment. Loved always, bl