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Red Sun

Rising red Sun ball of fire gleaming reddish reflection a crown of two avalanches sends tender smiling beams Beautiful adoration cherishing the Nature most swills the dark cloud by melting gives soft pleasure at dawn Contest name-Red Sun Date of writing: 26/06/2013

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Date: 6/28/2013 8:51:00 PM
Hello BL., beautiful it is, the crown in the most glorious view... i find it as the best thing offered ... good luck in the contest... LINDA
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/29/2013 9:24:00 AM
A lot of thanks again for your appreciation. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/28/2013 1:53:00 AM
filled with bright imagery, BL
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/28/2013 8:12:00 AM
A lot of thanks for your appreciation. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/26/2013 11:37:00 AM
This is a good poem with appropriate and quite well chosen words. It confirms the quality of your poetry which deserves my compliments
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Date: 6/26/2013 11:44:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your nice comment. Loved always, bl

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