Bl Devnath Poet Dodoitsu

Red Sun

Rising red Sun ball of fire
                                                gleaming reddish reflection
                                                 a crown of two avalanches
                                                sends tender smiling beams

                                                     Beautiful adoration
                                                cherishing the Nature most
                                             swills the dark cloud by melting
                                                gives soft pleasure at dawn


                 

                                                  Contest name-Red Sun
                                                   
                                               Date of writing: 26/06/2013

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Poet Destroyer A June 28, 2013 at 8:51 PM Hello BL., beautiful it is, the crown in the most glorious view... i find it as the best thing offered ... good luck in the contest... LINDA Bl Devnath June 29, 2013 at 9:24 AM A lot of thanks again for your appreciation. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich June 28, 2013 at 1:53 AM filled with bright imagery, BL Bl Devnath June 28, 2013 at 8:12 AM A lot of thanks for your appreciation. Loved always, bl

Mario De Paz June 26, 2013 at 11:37 AM This is a good poem with appropriate and quite well chosen words. It confirms the quality of your poetry which deserves my compliments Bl Devnath June 26, 2013 at 11:44 AM Thanks a lot for your nice comment. Loved always, bl